Belisarius Cawl Rework plus New Trazyn Abilities (Warhammer 40,000)

[AbaddonTheDisappointment]

Time for another round of reworking outdated 40k profiles with Cawl as today's rework of choice

Old Profile:

Belisarius Cawl

Archmagos Dominus Belisarius Cawl was already old at the birth of the Imperium, over ten thousand years ago. During that span of ages the Tech-Priest has served Mars and the Machine God as a Forge Lord and a Lexico Arcanus, but it is in his role as Magos Biologis that Cawl’s greatest mastery...

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New Profile:

AbaddonTheDisappointment/Cawl

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Also, I got some new abilities for Trazyn as well as rewordings for some old ones:

1. Rewording for his Time Stop/Time Manipulation: (Trazyn's stasis fields don't stop time or freeze targets, they entirely remove them from the timestream to stop them from moving)
2. Non-Physical Interaction: (Literally grabbed data out of thin air before projecting the information in his hand)

Both of these are from The Fall of Cadia; Phase Seven; Chapter One

 

[Shmooply]

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[Grand_Astartes]

Agreeeee

 

[Qawsedf234]

I feel like the 9th Dimensional Mathmatics and Warp energy quotes, which would be the basis for the Supergenius rating, should be moved to the front of the justification.

Other than that I think it looks good.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Shouldn't Cawl get prep via the ability to pull ******* titans and ships to the field with him?

 

[AbaddonTheDisappointment]

Shouldn't Cawl get prep via the ability to pull ******* titans and ships to the field with him?

That's not something he does. Bro ain't an inquisitor who can just pull troops and powerful shit if he wants

Also if we want to say ships technically every 40k character has a ship they can use lol

 

[DaReaperMan]

That's not something he does. Bro ain't an inquisitor who can just pull troops and powerful shit if he wants

Also if we want to say ships technically every 40k character has a ship they can use lol

I mean he should probably still have prep cause, ya know, Mechanicus lord guy dude lol

 

[AbaddonTheDisappointment]

I mean he should probably still have prep cause, ya know, Mechanicus lord guy dude lol

Eh every dude in 40k can have prep to pretty much field a shit ton of standard units but as for what Cawl can do with prep it's not like he can pull anything with it. Best he usually does with prep, from what I remember, is just bring his usual complement of skitarii or primaris if he's feeling spicy. I mean he already has a gun that pretty much one shots 99% of normal dudes in 40k.

Also removed the calc and the High 8-C+ stuff from Cawl's sandbox since the calc had to be reworked and now it's being contested so yeah. If anything I'll readd it in another CRT.

 

[Crabwhale]

This should work.

 

[Eseseso]

Wait, Cawl has no resistances? Lol trash.

All jokes aside, excellent job with his new page, and both that and Trazyn's power additions look good.

Minor thing: In his intelligence section, you should probably put "years" after "11,000".

 

[AbaddonTheDisappointment]

Welp that's two admin approvals so I'm just gonna add these to the profiles

Edit: Added all the changes

 

[Crabwhale]

Closing.