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Any advice for my WIP Civilization page?

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You can find it here.

I have several things to do for the characters thus far, but this is just as important. I'm trying to cut the fat for some sections. Currently I'm trying to put the magic of the verse for the characters themselves. I'll see if this is worth it; but I want an opinion on this. What to reduce to make it presentable? I'll mention some things later as Rosalice (Wonderful World) is finally having a Picture in the works... I just want some advice to cut so I can release this after someone I know does a calc for how many volts are in Duna (Wonderful World)'s Thunder Spread.

So, I have just this: Any advice to trim the text further somehow? Thanks in advance! ^-^
 
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