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Acrobatics rewording

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On second thought, maybe we should keep a trimmed down version of enhanced condition in the acrobatics page.

Instead of this:

"Leaping great distances, ignoring vertigo, surviving falls by simply maneuvering. Those are just a few actions that someone with great athletism can perform. The user is also considered to have extremely elevated stamina and endurance at the moment of performing such movements."

We could use this:

"Ignoring vertigo and surviving falls by simply maneuvering. Those are just a few actions that someone with great athletism can perform. The user is also considered to have extremely elevated stamina and endurance at the moment of performing such movements."

The page seems incomplete otherwise.
 
We could use this:

"Ignoring vertigo and surviving falls by simply maneuvering. Those are just a few actions that someone with great athletism can perform. The user is also considered to have extremely elevated stamina and endurance at the moment of performing such movements."

The page seems incomplete otherwise.
Ignoring vertigo isn't an acrobatics thing tho, that's just a niche resistance which is vague
And the second part is just "they have good stamina while doing the feats" which is too broad
Falling with grace could count ig even tho how you define that?
 
Ignoring vertigo isn't an acrobatics thing tho, that's just a niche resistance which is vague
And the second part is just "they have good stamina while doing the feats" which is too broad
Falling with grace could count ig even tho how you define that?
breaking your fall by rolling I guess
 
Anyway, does anybody have some better example than vertigo that we could use for that sentence?
 
I don't think there's really a suitable replacement, just leave enhanced condition out since outside falling with grace (which can be added to All Terrain Mobility) all of it doesn't fit into the page
 
Eh Mid-Air Jump since we haven't decided fully if to remove it and put in Flight page instead together with pseudo flight or not or just or to remove it in general
Personally I agree with putting it in pseudo flight
 
Eh Mid-Air Jump since we haven't decided fully if to remove it and put in Flight page instead together with pseudo flight or not or just or to remove it in general
Personally I agree with putting it in pseudo flight
Seems fine to me.
 
Does anybody else here have any comments?
 
Okay. Thanks.

Do we need to do anything else here?
 
Okay. Can I close this thread then?
 
I mean we didn't finish the Mid Air Jump thing, since nobody seems to disagree you can probably remove it
 
We could use this:

"Ignoring vertigo and surviving falls by simply maneuvering. Those are just a few actions that someone with great athletism can perform. The user is also considered to have extremely elevated stamina and endurance at the moment of performing such movements."

The page seems incomplete otherwise.
I would replace "great athletism" with "acrobatics", as this could be misleading otherwise, making new users think that this means that characters that are simply athletic fit for it, which goes into the entire issue of giving Hulk and the likes Acrobatics once again.
 
Yeah, this works, at least for me. Taking enhanced condition off their ENTIRELY just seemed wrong since the other parts of enhanced condition seemed to fit with acrobatics completely.
 
Tllmbrg:

Okay. I will handle it.
 
I would add in the Self Momentum/Inertia Manipulation some mentions over how it could be done, to avoid it being mixed up with Vector Manipulation, everything else seems fine.
 
Basically adding some examples over how movement can be manipulated within the definition of Acrobatics, to avoid it being mixed up with Vector Manipulation.
 
If you write a draft text for what you intend, we can evaluate it afterwards.
 
Scout should be removed from examples on the page since he doesn't have the power, I'd replace him with either Spider-Man or Daredevil myself
 
I'd say Spider-Man is the perfect example, everyone knows him and everyone's familiar with his acrobatic prowess
 
Is there some particularly acrobatic shinobi in Naruto?
 
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