Xu Jingming Update

[Zaratthustra]

Basically, this thread will be about a small addition to Xu Jingming first key and then adding his second key - Intermediary Cosmic Lifeform which in-verse is from level 5.50% to level 6.99%.

First Key
He already has Stealth Mastey but this will be another addition to it.
Abilities: Stealth Mastery (After reaching cellular level control, one's footsteps are softer than those of a cat, making no sound[1])
Resistence to: Mind Manipulation (By evolving, the mental strength[2] will increase with each level)

Second Key
Abilities:
Longevity (A Cosmic Lifeform has a much longer lifespan[24] compared to a Planetary Lifeform, it being 3000 years[20])
Self-Sustenance (Type 1 and 2, as a Cosmic Lifeform doesn't need to eat, drink, and breathe[24])
Enhanced Senses (Can see the pattern on grass and dust from several kilometers away, hear low and high-frequency sounds, and his brain functions have expanded by a hundred-fold to allow a higher flux of information[25]. Could see in the middle of the night[26] that the layer of dust on his yard has been walked on),
Extrasensory Perception (Can sense anything within 100 meters around himself[27], be it arrows, rain, movements of other beings, etc thanks to his consciousness[28]. Comprehend the Spacetime Volume, gaining the ability to sense the phenomena of all living things[29] including wills in Spacetime. Combining Mountain Immobilization with Flowing Water techniques made it possible for him to fight with enemies that are faster[30] than him by sensing their aura to determine their movements)
Photographic Memory (A Cosmic Lifeform has a photographic memory[31], making it an easy job to memorize 100k words and reach an almost native language level in just three hours)
Flight (Any Cosmic Lifeform can fly[25], including through space[24])
Energy Manipulation (Each cell of his body stores cosmic energy[25]. Can release his cosmic energy around himself to obliterate/pulverize[25] an area in a diameter of 3km)
Absorption (A Cosmic Lifeform can absorb the light of stars and all kinds of radiations[24]. At the same time, they can also absorb all kinds of lights[32])
Martial Arts (Can barrow the force of attacks to redirect[33] it toward his foe like a flow of water, guiding it not with just his spear but also with his hands[34] alone)
Body Control (By controlling their cells, they can tighten a wound[35] to massively slow bleeding. They can also control the efficiency of absorption of nutrients[36] from food to maximize their healing. They can also control their body to only lose fat[37] and not muscles)
Shockwave Creation (While completely restraining his energy, just the thrust of his spear causes shockwaves[23] in a hundred-meter radius)
Fear Manipulation (His body is enveloped by a spear intent[38] which induces fear)

Resistances:

Mind Manipulation (Could resist to a psychic force attack[39] from a level 8 Cosmic Lifeform that will make one collapse or feel drunk depending on their psychic resistance)​

Fire Manipulation, Heat Manipulation and Radiation Manipulation (A Cosmic Lifeform is not afraid of the flames or low temperatures in space, including all kind of radiations[24])​

Attack Potency:

Unfortunately, in this key he was mostly in a Virtual World where his body was made equal with the inhabitants of the said world thus he lacked the screentime to show higher fears. While three possible feats lack the speed being stated to be able to use Kinetic Energy formula to get some higher tier while the comparison with a nuclear bomb seems to not be usable as a tier after talking with several calc members. Basically, he will just be stronger than his previous key.

At least Small Building level (While inhabiting a weaker body, a simple kick contained tens of thousands of kg of force[13]. As a Cosmic Lifeform of his level he's considered a humanoid nuclear bomb[41] who can easily swing a spear that weighs 1000 tons)​

Speed:

Massively Hypersonic Reaction/Combat speed (Can block and intercept railguns that fire blocks of iron at mach 100[42]), At least Relativistic+, likely higher Travel speed (A normal Cosmic Lifeform [level 5.50+ %] can traverse hundreds of thousands of kilometers[43] with a single step. Xu Jingming, a level 6.99% Cosmic Lifeform, is much faster)

Lifting Strength:

Class M (His spear weighs more than 1000 tons[41])​

Stamina:

Higher than before (He jumped from a Planetary Lifeform to a Cosmic Lifeform, whose body passively absorb stellar/light energy[24] and radiations of all kinds[32] which are stored in his cells[25]​

Range:

At least 100 meters[23] with shockwaves while restraining his energy and up to 3 kilometers[25] when not holding back​

Standard Equipment:

Spear (Has a weight of at least 1000 tons[41])​

Intelligence: Bet you didn't expect keys for it, but they have in-verse an intelligence scaling from 1 to 100+ so for each key he will likely get a new but in this case, he didn't yet take the test to see how high it is. So, he will scale from his previous "Genius".

At least Genius, higher than before as he became a Cosmic Lifeform which has a photographic memory[31], their brain having evolved to be able to comprehend a higher flux of information[25]. His talent is a lot higher than most Cosmic Lifeforms of his level, which is shown through his fast speed of evolution as it took just one year to go from level 1 to level 7, as well as his combat bonus, and the comprehension of techniques such as the Flowing Water[48] and Earth Mobilization[49].​

Feats: Adding several more

• Fought with 180 planetary lifeforms while inhabiting the same body as them, and thanks to his mastery of spearmanship and for reaching 'fluidity of water'[28] with it, he easily could deflect and borrow the force of impact to fight them.
• Figured out the Earth Dao, reaching basic mastery of Earth Mobilization[49] which made all of his techniques with weapons to be flawless, meaning no flaw was able exploited by his foe.
• Thanks to reaching basic mastery of Spacetime with Flowing Water[48], it allows him to be very good at grasping the situation, be dynamic to correspond to the changes according to the enemy's situation to target their weaknesses.

TDlr: Small addition to his first key and a new Key.

 

[Planck69]

Looks good after passing over it once.

 

[Starter_Pack]

The stats seem fine from a glance, but there are grammatical errors everywhere. Lemme just...

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Self-Sustenance (Type 1 and 2, as a Cosmic Lifeform doesn't need to eat, drink, and breathe[24])

Enhanced Senses (Can see the pattern of grass and dust from several kilometers away, hear low and high-frequency sounds, and his brain functions have expanded by a hundred-fold to allow a higher flux of information[25]. Could see in the middle of the night[26] that the layer of dust on his yard had been walked on)

Extrasensory Perception (Can sense anything within 100 meters around himself[27], be it arrows, rain, movements of other beings, etc. thanks to his consciousness[28]. Is able to comprehend the Spacetime Volume, gaining the ability to sense the phenomena of all living things[29] including wills in Spacetime. Combining Mountain Immobilization with Flowing Water techniques made it possible for him to fight with enemies that are faster[30] than him by sensing their aura to determine their movements)

Energy Manipulation (Each cell of his body stores cosmic energy[25]. Can release his cosmic energy around himself to obliterate/pulverize[25] an area in a diameter of 3km)

Absorption (A Cosmic Lifeform can absorb the light of stars and all kind of radiation[24]. At the same time, they can also absorb lights of all kind[32])

Martial Arts (Can borrow the force of attacks to redirect[33] it toward his foe like a flow of water, guiding it not with just his spear but also with his hands[34] alone)

Body Control (By controlling their cells, Cosmic Lifeforms can tighten a wound[35] to massively slow bleeding. They can also control the efficiency of nutrient absorption[36] from food to maximize their healing. They can also control their body to only lose fat[37] and not muscle)

Shockwave Creation (While completely restraining his energy, just the thrust of his spear causes shockwaves[23] in a hundred-meter radius)

At least Small Building level (While inhabiting a weaker body, a simple kick contained tens of thousands of kg of force[13]. As a Cosmic Lifeform of his level he's considered a humanoid nuclear bomb[41] who can easily swing a spear that weighs 1000 tons)

Massively Hypersonic Reaction/Combat speed (Can block and intercept railguns that fire blocks of iron at mach 100[42]), At least Relativistic+, likely higher Travel speed (A normal Cosmic Lifeform [level 5.50+ %] can traverse hundreds of thousands of kilometers[43] with a single step. Xu Jingming, a level 6.99% Cosmic Lifeform, is much faster)

Class M (His spear weighs more than 1000 tons[41])

Higher than before (He jumped from a Planetary Lifeform to a Cosmic Lifeform, whose body passively absorb stellar/light energy[24] and radiation of all kinds[32] which are stored in his cells[25])

Spear (Has a weight of at least 1000 tons[41])

At least Genius, higher than before (He became a Cosmic Lifeform which has a photographic memory[31], their brains having evolved to be able to comprehend a higher flux of information[25]. His talent is a lot higher than most Cosmic Lifeforms of his level, which is shown through his fast speed of evolution since it took just one year to go from level 1 to level 7, as well as his combat bonus and the comprehension of techniques such as the Flowing Water[48] and Earth Mobilization[49]

Fought with 180 planetary lifeforms while inhabiting the same body as them, and thanks to his mastery of spearmanship and for reaching 'fluidity of water'[28] with it, he easily could deflect and borrow the force of impact to fight them.

Figured out the Earth Dao, reaching basic mastery of Earth Mobilization[49] which made all of his techniques with weapons to be flawless, meaning no flaw was able to be exploited by his foe.

Everything in there is a basic grammar check, if you could adjust everything to match the revisions I made, then I really have no issue here.

 

[Zaratthustra]

Fixed most of the things you pointed out with a few exceptions where it would have changed too much the meaning of the text.

 

[Zaratthustra]

Bump.

 

[Deceived3596]

Everything looks fine to me.

 

[ZackMoon1234]

Looks straightforward

 

[Zaratthustra]

Bump.

 

[Zaratthustra]

4 Agree (3 being from staff). Should be enough as it's nothing controversial. I'll likely update in 20h or so, still, some time for more other users to not appear.

 

[Zaratthustra]

Well, I'll update it. Thanks for coming here, my fellow users.

Can be closed.

 

[Starter_Pack]

Weeeeeee...