Update for Shrek's Profile

[MinecraftHater2011]

Old profile here; new profile here.

Spoiler: Summary of Changes

• Added references and more scans.
• Reworked P&A section to look nice n' fancy.
• Added optional equipment.
• Added standard tactics.
• Added Limited Fire Manipulation under Toon Force (we already accept Shrek to have burnt a ship's sails with his Toon Force on his profile, and looking at the scan, there aren't any other culprits we can see that might've caused the fire [if you look closely, you can see that the sails literally just combust out of nowhere], so we might as well put it on the profile as Limited Fire Manipulation under Toon Force).
• Added Vehicular Mastery (see profile for justification).
• Added Resistance to Sound Manipulation (see profile for justification).
• Added Fire Manipulation, Magic, Flight, Transformation, and Sleep Manipulation via optional equipment (see profile for justifications).

Agree: HonestlyBored24, DimeUhDozen, IDK3465, SamanPatou (disagree on Sound Manipulation resistance), Therefir

Neutral:

Disagree:

 

[MinecraftHater2011]

Bump

 

[HonestlyBored24]

Looks good to me

 

[DimeUhDozen]

Looks pretty good!

 

[IDK3465]

Looks good

 

[SamanPatou]

Looks fine, though I'm not quite sure about Sound Manipulation, because a bunch of people were also listening and didn't suffet any ill effect, so either everyone in verse has such resistance of those sounds are selectively harmful, which can very well be the case given the comedic nature of the show.

The first display of enhanced senses could not be totally accurate, Donkey was smelling brimstone too, he just couldn't tell what its source was, which is more a matter of knowledge than senses. I believe the smell of brimstone was simply widely spread around the are.
The second ES link regarding Puss leads to a now-erased video

The rest looks fine.

 

[MinecraftHater2011]

Looks fine, though I'm not quite sure about Sound Manipulation, because a bunch of people were also listening and didn't suffet any ill effect, so either everyone in verse has such resistance of those sounds are selectively harmful, which can very well be the case given the comedic nature of the show.

I see. Would a possible rating for the Sound Manipulation resistance work better then?

The first display of enhanced senses could not be totally accurate, Donkey was smelling brimstone too, he just couldn't tell what its source was, which is more a matter of knowledge than senses. I believe the smell of brimstone was simply widely spread around the are.

Oh yeah, that's my bad; that's like the one thing from the og profile that I didn't change/look over. I'll probably just give enhanced smell the boot for now until a proper feat is found for it in the future.

The second ES link regarding Puss leads to a now-erased video

Should be fixed now.

 

[SamanPatou]

I see. Would a possible rating for the Sound Manipulation resistance work better then?

I'm quite unsure, just because such a large amount of people have remained uneffected, making the gag suggest those voices are comically specific in targeting their victims.

 

[MinecraftHater2011]

I'm quite unsure, just because such a large amount of people have remained uneffected, making the gag suggest those voices are comically specific in targeting their victims.

Yeah, but I think Shrek getting visibly irritated by the singing shows that he was among the few things that were targeted by the Sound Manipulation, no?

 

[Therefir]

Looks good but Enhanced Senses and Toon Force shouldn't be under Superhuman Physical Characteristics, they should be on their own. Superhuman Physical Characteristics only covers the physical stats of a character and has no association with supernatural abilities.

 

[SamanPatou]

Yeah, but I think Shrek getting visibly irritated by the singing shows that he was among the few things that were targeted by the Sound Manipulation, no?

Yeah but I don't see any clear indication of Shrek resisting that effect, nor that being marked as a specific occurrence. It seems to be instead just bothered by the cacophony, not unlike other commoners in those scenes, whilst the gander and the glasses are precisely targeted by supernatural effects.

 

[MinecraftHater2011]

It's been a bit over 24 hours since the CRT got enough staff votes, so I went ahead and applied the accepted changes. This thread can be closed now ig