Olivia Valedstorm additions, changes and a new character to the verse (Death's Daughter and the Ebony Blade)

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Hello. In this CRT I want to propose some addition's to Olivia since Volume 2 has been released.

For starters, expand upon her Enhanced Senses ability with the following:

In Volume 2 she stated that she can sense bloodlust[5]. Can also see Shimmers hiding across the town with Heaven's Sight[5]. Can also kill people behind her without turning around and has pinpoint accuracy[5]

Also, her Skilled Hand-to-Hand Combatant section is a bit bleak so I propose to expand it via the following:

, and can exchange blows with Rosenmarie[2]

Next up, add an Aura with the following reasoning and scans:

Aura (Fear Inducing; Olivia has an unnameable aura that can leave people in fear as she closes the distance and makes them nauseate[5])

Then, she also demonstrates skill while throwing knifes and using a mobile ballista, so she should receive Expert Marksman via the following:

Expert Marksman (Can kill people behind her without looking[5], and has good aim with her Mobile Ballista[6])

This would also mean her Standard Equipment section will have 2 additions:

Knife: Olivia carries around a throwing knife that she can use at any time to kill her opponent from range.

Mobile Ballista: A weapon that she attained in Volume 1. This allows her to attack at incredible distance while riding on a horse.

Also I believe her Intelligence section should be expanded upon in terms of combat via the following:

She has also shown to defend against Shimmers, special troops meant for information gathering and reconnaissance even after their skill in stealth is praised a cut above everyone else. Has fought and defeated larger opponents such as Volmer, a man compared to a grizzly bear and even though one might expect him to merely have brute force, he was actually considered extremely skilled and was swift on his feet. Olivia also defeated Rosenmarie, a knight who was considered far stronger and more skilled than anyone seen before, who also had a sword that would instantly create flames anywhere it cut. She out-skilled Rosenmarie to the point she thought she would loser her own flow.

And I would also like to introduce a new character to the verse, Rosenmarie Von Berlietta, who actually elevates Olivia's skill to even greater height besides being more skilled than other skilled knights:

StorytellingDemonKing/Rosenmarie

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Sadly, it's not all great news. Currently Olivia is rated as Supersonic+, however, this rating comes from using the 1/220 time frame for human reactions, which is only achievable in special cases, but there is no indication any of the soldiers she fought had this, meaning she, and anyone who scales, will be downgraded to Supersonic.

 

[Everything12]

This all seems fine.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Thank you for the evaluation!

 

[Starter_Pack]

This looks fine.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Thank you for the evaluation!

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Added the accepted changes. This thread can be closed.

 

[Starter_Pack]

Done.