Sans2345
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EditedGyroNutz said:Eight things:
Stuff like Name, Powers and Abilities etc should be in BOLD
Her tier should be 'At least 9-C, likely 9-B'. Make sure the lower value is before the higher value.
Change 'Wall level strength and street level durability' to Superhuman Physical Characteristics, and 'Cold Weapon Mastery' to 'Weapon Mastery'
Her stamina should simply be 'High' or 'Unknown'.
Stuff like 'Wall level' should be in BOLD
Range should simply be 'Standard Melee Range'. Bear traps have normal range, just that they can be laid down as traps.
Intelligence should be 'Below Average', having enhanced hearing doesn't make you smarter. Furthermore, her weakness should simply be 'Low intelligence'
Fix your formatting with spaces and returns too.