There appears to be pretty significant grammatical issues in this article regarding comma usage.
For example, the first introductory sentence of the article reads: “When it comes to the topic of black holes there are a lot of common misconceptions about their nature and through that also misconceptions about the evaluation of feats involving them.”
When it should read: “When it comes to the topic of black holes, there are a lot of common misconceptions about their nature and, through that, also misconceptions about the evaluation of feats involving them.”
These comma errors can easily be found throughout the vast majority of the article. Additionally, the article appears to have awkward word choice, wording, and sentence structure, though it’s not very significant.
For example, the first introductory sentence of the article reads: “When it comes to the topic of black holes there are a lot of common misconceptions about their nature and through that also misconceptions about the evaluation of feats involving them.”
When it should read: “When it comes to the topic of black holes, there are a lot of common misconceptions about their nature and, through that, also misconceptions about the evaluation of feats involving them.”
These comma errors can easily be found throughout the vast majority of the article. Additionally, the article appears to have awkward word choice, wording, and sentence structure, though it’s not very significant.
