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Archaons Profile
Okay, before I get y’all into it, I would like to say this is my first actually attempt at getting something changed. So I apologize if the rhetoric is bad, or if the set up is challenging to read.
Suggestion 1;
Archaon is given the Regeneration Key, ‘Mid Low,’ which is;
The ability to heal wounds that would normally leave large scars, such as severe burns or deep injuries.
For these reasons.
I believe this to be taken too strongly, for the reason in Chapter XI, after Archaon saves Giselle from Bhorgl. She later finds him in his tent, shirtless.
“The ability to heal wounds that would normally leave large scars, or severe burns...” While Archaons body is detailed to be covered in a patchwork of scars, and cauterization attempts, also if necessary I can even find the scan where Dagobert is stitching up Archaons wounds.
I believe his healing should be ‘Low,’ what would take us weeks, or months to heal, may only take him a week, to a couple weeks. He is still left with severe scarring, and contusions, burns from cauterization, etc.
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Suggestion 2;
Next, he is given Self-Sustenance Types 2 & 3, which is not needing sleep/rest, or food/drink.
For this Keyed reason
I believe this is blatantly shown as untrue in the other chapters, here.
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Suggestion 3; In this case I would suggest we remove this Key altogether, as we already have “Biological Absorption via Armor of Morkar.”
Archaon himself, does not have a Resistance to Biological Mutation/Transmutation.
He also has “Resistence to Biological Mutation/Transmutation” via this feat
Though this isn’t an ability of his inherently. He only gains this inside the Armor of Morkar, as shown here. As you can see in this link, prior to the Armor, Archaon was very susceptible to above mentioned “resistance” clams.
https://imgur.com/a/ZRp3faR
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Suggestion 4;
Removal of “Resistance to Pain Manipulation,” which they got from this “feat.” Saying he “endured” it.
https://imgur.com/PAWahhd
When in fact he was being I guess “possessed.” Or in Archaons words, “Thing that corrupts my flesh, and pollutes my soul.”
Archaon couldn’t stop this, he didn’t endure it via not feeling pain, he suffered through it because he couldn’t stop it.
https://imgur.com/a/SY9rQBB
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Suggestion 5;
I do not believe he should have Immortality via Regeneration, as he can’t regenerate from wounds that would kill him.
He simply dies, and is brought back via Fate Manipulation by Be’Lekor.
https://imgur.com/a/iMrNGYb
That is all of my suggestions, I’ve never done this before officially, so play nice with me.
I’m open to discussing these ideas, these are just things I noticed when I quickly re-read these keys over, and cross referenced with my Novel, and RT I’m making.
Okay, before I get y’all into it, I would like to say this is my first actually attempt at getting something changed. So I apologize if the rhetoric is bad, or if the set up is challenging to read.
Suggestion 1;
Archaon is given the Regeneration Key, ‘Mid Low,’ which is;
The ability to heal wounds that would normally leave large scars, such as severe burns or deep injuries.
For these reasons.
I believe this to be taken too strongly, for the reason in Chapter XI, after Archaon saves Giselle from Bhorgl. She later finds him in his tent, shirtless.
“The ability to heal wounds that would normally leave large scars, or severe burns...” While Archaons body is detailed to be covered in a patchwork of scars, and cauterization attempts, also if necessary I can even find the scan where Dagobert is stitching up Archaons wounds.
I believe his healing should be ‘Low,’ what would take us weeks, or months to heal, may only take him a week, to a couple weeks. He is still left with severe scarring, and contusions, burns from cauterization, etc.
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Next, he is given Self-Sustenance Types 2 & 3, which is not needing sleep/rest, or food/drink.
For this Keyed reason
I believe this is blatantly shown as untrue in the other chapters, here.
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Suggestion 3; In this case I would suggest we remove this Key altogether, as we already have “Biological Absorption via Armor of Morkar.”
Archaon himself, does not have a Resistance to Biological Mutation/Transmutation.
He also has “Resistence to Biological Mutation/Transmutation” via this feat
Though this isn’t an ability of his inherently. He only gains this inside the Armor of Morkar, as shown here. As you can see in this link, prior to the Armor, Archaon was very susceptible to above mentioned “resistance” clams.
https://imgur.com/a/ZRp3faR
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Suggestion 4;
Removal of “Resistance to Pain Manipulation,” which they got from this “feat.” Saying he “endured” it.
https://imgur.com/PAWahhd
When in fact he was being I guess “possessed.” Or in Archaons words, “Thing that corrupts my flesh, and pollutes my soul.”
Archaon couldn’t stop this, he didn’t endure it via not feeling pain, he suffered through it because he couldn’t stop it.
https://imgur.com/a/SY9rQBB
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Suggestion 5;
I do not believe he should have Immortality via Regeneration, as he can’t regenerate from wounds that would kill him.
He simply dies, and is brought back via Fate Manipulation by Be’Lekor.
https://imgur.com/a/iMrNGYb
That is all of my suggestions, I’ve never done this before officially, so play nice with me.
I’m open to discussing these ideas, these are just things I noticed when I quickly re-read these keys over, and cross referenced with my Novel, and RT I’m making.
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