added the maanim profile officiall on wiki fandom

[PrinceStories]

this thread is just to get input from some of the staff here if they feel ok with this profile

The maanim (The Unwritten)

This profile was made by me and my partner @Fahri_Ultimate

 

[Fahri_Ultimate]

Agreement

 

[Samael_010]

agree add my boy the maanim

 

[Rau]

agreed

 

[Antvasima]

@PsychoWarper @Sandman31 @Qawsedf234 @ByAsura @Sir_Ovens @LordTracer @Emirp sumitpo

What do you think about this?

 

[PrinceStories]

Bump

 

[PsychoWarper]

Obviously capitalise the M in Maanim and I dont think “by destroying stories and creating again them” is necessary to have in the Tier section.

The explanations for the abilities need some capitalisation work but outside that the rest looks pretty good. Could only really skim over stuff so ill take a closer look later to be sure.

 

[PrinceStories]

Obviously capitalise the M in Maanim and I dont think “by destroying stories and creating again them” is necessary to have in the Tier section.

The explanations for the abilities need some capitalisation work but outside that the rest looks pretty good. Could only really skim over stuff so ill take a closer look later to be sure.

some I can fix it but what is meant by ability capitalisation?

 

[PrinceStories]

Bump

 

[PrinceStories]

bump

 

[PsychoWarper]

some I can fix it but what is meant by ability capitalisation?

Right should have been more clear my bad.

“Resurrection (can rise from the dead and come back to life if the maanim is blown and sounded, he will pass beyond the veil of legend and will be reborn [1])”

Here is an example, the can should be capitalised. Not a giant issue just how we generally do profiles.

 

[Testarossa002]

some I can fix it but what is meant by ability capitalisation?

Turn this:

Resurrection (can rise from the dead and come back to life if the maanim is blown and sounded, he will pass beyond the veil of legend and will be reborn [1]),

To this

Resurrection (Can rise from the dead and come back to life if the Maanim is blown and sounded, he will pass beyond the veil of legend and will be reborn [1]),

And so on

 

[PrinceStories]

I have fixed it

 

[PrinceStories]

Bump

 

[PrinceStories]

Bump, can the profile be created now?

 

[Antvasima]

I have fixed it

Bump, can the profile be created now?

@PsychoWarper

What do you think?

 

[PsychoWarper]

@PsychoWarper

What do you think?

The notable techniques section isn’t needed but yeah outside that it looks good to me

 

[PrinceStories]

The notable techniques section isn’t needed but yeah outside that it looks good to me

I don't mind deleting The notable techniques will but can the profile be Accepted now?, if it can be accepted then The Maanim profile will be created now

 

[PsychoWarper]

I don't mind deleting The notable techniques will but can the profile be Accepted now?, if it can be accepted then The Maanim profile will be created now

I believe it should be acceptable, might be good to wait for the ok from Ant but outside that it should be good to go afaik.

 

[PrinceStories]

I believe it should be acceptable, might be good to wait for the ok from Ant but outside that it should be good to go afaik.

Alright, Thank you for the response given and also I thank you also for your help to correct The Maanim's Profile

 

[PsychoWarper]

Np

 

[PrinceStories]

Bump, i think this is acceptable so can I profile The Maanim please?

 

[Robo432343]

do we care about the English Mistakes in this blog

 

[PrinceStories]

do we care about the English Mistakes in this blog

This thread is not for fix English Mistakes, more precisely the purpose of this thread is to get staff input and suggestions as to what is wrong in the profile blog

 

[PsychoWarper]

Yeah the main thing im waiting on would be Ant for a last ok

 

[Antvasima]

What PsychoWarper accepted can probably be applied now.

 

[PrinceStories]

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/The_Maanim_(The_Unwritten)

Profile page has been created, so maybe this thread can be closed

 

[Antvasima]

Okay. I will do so. Thank you to everybody who helped out here.