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Hey, hey, fanta here. Toaru CRT here. No idea if it was just better for me to do nothing or not considering how messy Toaru profiles are... but this fanta figures she should focus on helping out the verse by fixing up a few issues... By revamping profiles, yay!


Gabriel
Old | New
Changes Catalog
  • Added a quote
  • Reworked the keys, making it two keys, Pre-Four Elements Restoration & Post-Four Elements Restoration, instead of three keys
  • Reworked abilities- full details will be listed in Spoiler Tabbers below
  • Reworked + added justifications and scans for abilities, AP/SS/Dura/Speed and so forth
  • Reworked intelligence, giving Gabriel/Misha a solid intelligence rating + a more in-depth justification
Angel Fall Sub-Tabber
World War III Sub-Tabber
Same as before, plus:
It is stated that Angel are flesh puppets filled with vast preternatural power that are essentially remote controlled by God, which doesn't have a mind to think and can only look like it's thinking on its own],<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-28"><span>[</span>21<span>]</span></a> however, Gabriel contradicts this idea on multiple occasions, with her able to gather sufficient information on Sasha Kreutzev and act as her convincingly enough to fool Kanzaki and Tsuchimikado for a time, only failing due to her mistakenly using a male name as an alias. She even express joy in eating sweets,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-29"><span>[</span>22<span>]</span></a> and even feel have the need to mock her opponents.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-ToaruV4Ch3P3-11"><span>[</span>11<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-ToaruV21Ch8P2-15"><span>[</span>15<span>]</span></a>

Combat-wise, she has shown the ability to competently use Sasha Kreutzev's tools to fight when she had subdued Hino Jinsaku and forced him into a retreat,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-30"><span>[</span>23<span>]</span></a> with the distance control and battle skill that she showed to Kamijou Touma while doing so made him certain that he would only be played with if they fought,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-ToaruV4Ch3P3-11"><span>[</span>11<span>]</span></a> making her someone who is vastly superior to Kamijou in terms of fighting skills. While the majority of their fight was off-screen, she still held her own against Kanzaki Kaori in a battle that held both of their lives in the line to a maximum of thirty minutes,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-ToaruV4Ch3P5-18"><span>[</span>18<span>]</span></a> making her comparable in skill to the Saint. Held her own against the combined might and skill of Carissa and the Maiden of Versailles,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-ToaruV21Ch8P2-15"><span>[</span>15<span>]</span></a> holding an advantage against them by exploiting their need to protect non-combatants.
Kanzaki Kaori
Old | New
Changes Catalog
Kanzaki is an expert magician, with knowledge in multiple styles of magic that allows her to use a mix of Christian, Buddhist and Shinto spells. In a split second, She managed to identify a Norse-based spell, their basis and analyzed the meaning of magical runes in order to come up with counters on sight.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/WalmartTouma#cite_note-NorseSSC3P4-97"><span>[</span>36<span>]</span></a> Upon engaging in combat with Dion Fortune, Kanzaki almost immediately found an answer to defeating the unbeatable Golden magicians with ease,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/WalmartTouma#cite_note-ShinyakuV22RC4P9-65"><span>[</span>11<span>]</span></a> much to Dion's exasperation, who shouldn't be inferior to the likes of Samuel Liddell MacGregor Mathers and Aleister Crowley in magic-based knowledge and skill.

Kanzaki also has a degree of investigative skill stemming from Neccessarius sending her out to investigate and resolve Magic Side incidents and capture the Magic Side criminals behind said incidents, with only a small group assisting her or entirely by herself.

Combat Skill

Acqua of the Back
Old | New
Changes Catalog
  • Reworked the scaling and keys for Acqua + added justifications and scans for abilities, AP/SS/Dura/Speed and so forth
  • Reworked + add new abilities- full details will be listed in Spoiler Tabbers below
  • Reworked intelligence and gave a more in-depth justification, giving him Genius intelligence
Full Power
Post-Saint Destroyer
Same as before, but to a weaker degree
Post World War III
Same as before, but to a massively weaker degree than before and excluding Divine Mother's Mercy and anything from Standard Saint Abilities

Like any Saint who wishes to wield a large amount of power of a Saint, he needs the skills and disposition required to control that large amount of power as well as the predictive ability to predict what the various negative effects and other side effects of creating their ridiculous strength and speeds were and then using assisting magic to meticulously deal with those effects, with hundreds and even thousands of those negative effects being constantly created in battle and overlooking even one while the situation changed from instant to instant would lead to death in a high speed fight.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-TAMIV18C5P3-40"><span>[</span>10<span>]</span></a>

Moreover, prior to the events of being temporarily depowered by Saint Destroyer and then permanently depowered after the events of World War III, he wielded both the power of a Saint and the power of God's Right Seat which doubled the burden of controlling his power, yet, he had the 'talent' to control the two incompatible elements of a Saint and God's Right Seat in one body.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-TAMIV16C4P2-33"><span>[</span>3<span>]</span></a> But, even after he lost his powers, he still retained methodology for freely manipulating great power within himself, allowing him to parry, deflect, and otherwise handle whatever an average magician can throw at him.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...t/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-ShinyakuV8C2P5-48"><span>[</span>18<span>]</span></a>

Outside of combat, he is capable of imparting knowledge in medical facilities within battle zones to lower mortality rates, teach poor and hungry villages how to cook Murdock and overall be active even outside the battlefield to the point that some call him a 'Sage'.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/Sandbox_Dot_One#cite_note-TAMIV16C2P4-62"><span>[</span>27<span>]</span></a>
Combat Skill
Index Librorum Prohibitorum
Old | New
Changes Catalog
  • Reworked the scaling for Index
  • Reworked + add new abilities- full details will be listed in Spoiler Tabbers below
  • Reworked + added justifications and scans for abilities, AP/SS/Dura/Speed and so forth
  • Reworked intelligence, giving Index an Extraordinary Genius intelligence rating + a more in-depth justification
  • Giving Index an LS via Magic rating due to upscaling from Ymir's Ocean Magician's Class G LS calculation
  • Reworked Index's Walking Church and turned it into Optional Equipment as Inde only held it for a limited time until it was permanently destroyed by Touma's IB
Resistance to:

Index is capable of perfectly memorizing anything, this is one of the reasons why she was chosen as the vessel for the 103,000 grimoires. Her perfect memory can also even be used to memorize people's motions, allowing her to excel in sports like Darts if she understands it intellectually and can make herself evolve too fast for people to catch up.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-34"><span>[</span>27<span>]</span></a> Index also has powerful analytical skills due to her perfect memory, with her deducing that someone was attempting to put together a grimoire in her head and planned to steal it from her by recalling things that happened for a split second, like an image on a surface like a balloon or bottle she has seen for just an instant after the surface is destroyed,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-35"><span>[</span>28<span>]</span></a> or her memorizing each frame of a 30 fps anime and then instantly examining them all to search for inconsistencies in the animation from frame to frame.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-36"><span>[</span>29<span>]</span></a>

As a result of the 103,000 grimoires in her head, she holds a vast amount of knowledge about magic, making her vastly superior to the likes of Stiyl Magnus, Kanzaki Kaori and most other Magicians in-verse in terms of magical knowledge. She can recognize most styles of magic, spells and their origin on sight as shown with her analyzing a golem's structure and cause it to fall apart by throwing safety pins at specific locations while saying the counter-spell,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...Aru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV6Ch4P4-1"><span>[</span>1<span>]</span></a> her using the flaws in one's spellcasting to take control of their magic,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...Aru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV7Ch3P1-2"><span>[</span>2<span>]</span></a> or her taking control over the powerful spiritual item known as Curtana Original after having some time to analyse its workings by reanalyzing it with magical knowledge from her 103,000 grimoires.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...ru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV18Ch7P5-3"><span>[</span>3<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...u_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV18Ch8P5-28"><span>[</span>24<span>]</span></a>

Her best showing of her magical knowledge was her teaming up with Leivinia Birdway to create a imitation divine technique that took a single fragment of the great power of the gods and allowed a human to make a high-quality recreation of that phenomenon which was included in Othinus' lance that would've destroyed the world and the 11 dimensions that holds it together, and transformed it into a pure black landscape.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-37"><span>[</span>30<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-38"><span>[</span>31<span>]</span></a>

While in her John's Pen state, Index is capable of calmly and methodically analyzes everything in front of her and searches for the most appropriate response to enemy attacks and spells using her magical knowledge from her 103,000 grimoires,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...ru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV1Ch2P1-10"><span>[</span>10<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...oAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV1Ch4-11"><span>[</span>11<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...u_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV21Ch5P4-12"><span>[</span>12<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...u_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV21Ch7P8-13"><span>[</span>13<span>]</span></a> which allowed her to keep the upper hand for the majority of her battle against Stiyl Magnus until Lola Stuart stepped in to help him,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...u_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV21Ch5P4-12"><span>[</span>12<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...u_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV21Ch7P8-13"><span>[</span>13<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...ru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV22C9P5-17"><span>[</span>17<span>]</span></a><a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...u_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ToaruV22C11P3-18"><span>[</span>18<span>]</span></a> and can change her attacks based on newly acquired data she obtains from observing a target as shown in her second battle with Kamijou Touma while in her John's Pen state.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...gician_Rework2#cite_note-ShinyakuV22RC4P13-25"><span>[</span>23<span>]</span></a>
Leivinia Birdway
Old | New
Changes Catalog
  • Reworked the scaling for Leivinia via physically scaling to Kamijou Touma, and via magic via scaling to Kanzaki Kaori
  • Reworked + add new abilities- full details will be listed in Spoiler Tabbers below
  • Reworked + added justifications and scans for abilities, AP/SS/Dura/Speed and so forth
  • Reworked intelligence, giving Leivinia a more in-depth intelligence rating and justification
  • Removed Cannibalization Birdway key and turned it into Optional Equipment as Leivinia only held it for a limited time, was only used in battle for a select few scene and it isn't stated that Leivinia lost any of her magical abilities nor was there any statement that her stats had changed
Nya-Nya Bulembu Dress

Resistance to:
Magical Knowledge
Genius (Leivinia Birdway is the leader of Dawn-Colored Sunlight, one of the most prominent Golden-style cabals that's famous for accomplishing their goals by any means necessary,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-67"><span>[</span>28<span>]</span></a> and whose leaders are known to be ruthless, wise and to have given Neccessarius their fair share of bitter experiences,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-68"><span>[</span>29<span>]</span></a> despite her relatively young age. She's a skilled magician, having devise a method using a set-in-stone motions into magical symbols to support herself and power up her magic.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ShinyakuV6C7P13-45"><span>[</span>6<span>]</span></a> Even her summoned explosions, which seemingly didn't rely on large scale preparation, accurate theories and calculations for Golden-style magic, and instead used her accurate intution and the measurements made by her eye to cast in the eyes of Stiyl,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-SPStiylP5-42"><span>[</span>3<span>]</span></a> is actually a calculated action where she accurately repeats the proper technique.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ShinyakuV6C7P13-45"><span>[</span>6<span>]</span></a> In addition, her subordinate, Mark Space, stated that someone as skilled as her, with all 22 cards of the major arcana, could call a mass of Telesma that displayed the details of the Archangel she was summoning unlike him.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:FantaRin_The_First/ToAru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-SPMark-44"><span>[</span>5<span>]</span></a>)

Combat
Gifted (Leivinia is a suprisingly skilled fighter, having the ability to keep up with a Saint like Kanzaki Kaori in a battle,<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U...Aru_Magician_Rework2#cite_note-NorseSSC6P4-40"><span>[</span>1<span>]</span></a> and hold her own against Kamijou despite holding back. She was capable of rapidly adapting to Kamijou's moves as they fought and utilized her limited moveset to the best of her ability.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U..._Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ShinyakuV6C7P8-43"><span>[</span>4<span>]</span></a> In her battle against Kamijou, she had also used the pain and fear of guns that he gotten after he had been shot against him, exploiting it to get an opening for a decisive blow.<a href="https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/U..._Magician_Rework2#cite_note-ShinyakuV6C7P8-43"><span>[</span>4<span>]</span></a>)


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Gave Gabriel/Misha 5-B AP with Pure Elements
Gabriel doesn't use pure elements, that's not what the quote says, so this 5B AP has to go.

The quote says that both cases, Gabriel and Coronzon, are using the same elements as everyone else but that the purity is higher, this part is correct, but it never says that Pure Elements and Gabriel's Water have the same level of purity themselves.

Not just the problem in the quote itself, the mechanics behind each ability is completely different and so is the scaling for each of them.

Coronzon uses Enochian magic to summon elements using the Laws from Beriah, Gabriel infuses normal water with Telesma.

Coronzon’s elements are notably way above Saint level (the best that Aleister, who is way above other Saint level magicians, could do was reflect one) meanwhile everyone who fought Gabriel could block its attacks and often slice their wings which are explicitly noted to be fully covered in Telesma.

I will read the other reworks closely later, but I did read the basic parts and there's nothing I disagree with so far
 
Isn't Gabriel should be Multi-Solar System through Astro in Hand, because she can remove stars
 
Isn't Gabriel should be Multi-Solar System through Astro in Hand, because she can remove stars
Was it a starry sky? I'm actually unsure of it being one since I've never seen them, the closest was like Accelerator's 4-B feat
 
I'm not sure if I understand the Reality Warping justification for Gabriel. "The pressure from Gabriel... had caused the entire world to audibly strain to the breaking point" is a bit vague in its phrasing - what was actually happening in this scene?

Regenerating after being reduced to pure energy, as mentioned in Gabriel's section, is High level regeneration, not Low-Godly.

You should fix the spelling error in Gabriel's Intelligence section: "and even feel have the need to mock her opponents".

The Law Manipulation justification for Kanzaki only clearly indicates that they were using something which is dependent on a law - Law Manipulation specifically requires being able to change/adjust laws in some manner. In this case, it wouldn't simply mean being able to use Yuisen, but being able to adjust the rules that Yuisen is bound to. I don't think the scans say this.

You should probably add the justification for Photographic Memory into Index's section, even though it is explained in the Intelligence section as well. It would just make it easier to track.

Preferably use consistent formatting when writing out "and/&" in ability sections: "Mind Deconstruction & Soul Fusion and Corruption" in Index's and Leivinia's sections read quite strangely.

Other than these matters, everything here seems to be well explained and justified.
 
I'm not sure if I understand the Reality Warping justification for Gabriel. "The pressure from Gabriel... had caused the entire world to audibly strain to the breaking point" is a bit vague in its phrasing - what was actually happening in this scene?

Regenerating after being reduced to pure energy, as mentioned in Gabriel's section, is High level regeneration, not Low-Godly.

You should fix the spelling error in Gabriel's Intelligence section: "and even feel have the need to mock her opponents".

The Law Manipulation justification for Kanzaki only clearly indicates that they were using something which is dependent on a law - Law Manipulation specifically requires being able to change/adjust laws in some manner. In this case, it wouldn't simply mean being able to use Yuisen, but being able to adjust the rules that Yuisen is bound to. I don't think the scans say this.

You should probably add the justification for Photographic Memory into Index's section, even though it is explained in the Intelligence section as well. It would just make it easier to track.

Preferably use consistent formatting when writing out "and/&" in ability sections: "Mind Deconstruction & Soul Fusion and Corruption" in Index's and Leivinia's sections read quite strangely.

Other than these matters, everything here seems to be well explained and justified.
Basically, what it says in the tin. It isn't like how some anime characters are just so strong that the world breaks but moreso Gabriel has some weird overcomplicated thing surrunding her that makes the world unable to contain her "presence", so to speak, which I figured was best written as RW. Can remove it, if need be, though.

Okay, I'll change Gabriel's Low Godly to High, and fix the spelling error in her intelligence section- will admit that English isn't exactly my first language, so errorrs like that crop up.

Hm, IG, should I just remove the Law Manip? Ain't exactly sure how Law Manip works, and only added it cuz I saw that line of, "the law of cutting anything", and thought it fit Law Manip.

Completely forgot about that, will add Photographic Memory to Index's section, and ye, will also make the change regarding and/&.

Ah, so can I count you in the agree section of my CRT once I fix these issues?
 
Basically, what it says in the tin. It isn't like how some anime characters are just so strong that the world breaks but moreso Gabriel has some weird overcomplicated thing surrunding her that makes the world unable to contain her "presence", so to speak, which I figured was best written as RW. Can remove it, if need be, though.
That should be fine, then - the context is just a bit hard to read in the scan itself.

Ah, so can I count you in the agree section of my CRT once I fix these issues?
Yes, you can.
 
That should be fine, then - the context is just a bit hard to read in the scan itself.


Yes, you can.
Done.

Did the changes that you said I should do in my sandboxes, i.e, change Low-Godly to High and fix the spelling error for Gabriel; added the justification for Photographic Memory into Index's section, and fix the "and/&" thing for Index's and Leivinia's sections. Also, I just decided to get rid of the Law Manip for Kanzaki as even I was unsure of it.

Will now add you to the agree section.
 
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