I also think it dubious to call being sent to Masters: Ex "being sent to the main game timeline", when, as has been shown, calling Masters: Ex, with its different mechanics & seemingly different history & whatnot.... Well, it seems contentious.
Also, why not Rei/Akari, given the player character can be either of them?
From summary:
"Hundreds of years ago,"
Dubious.
Laventon takes photos with a camera, the design & photo quality of which suggests equivalent to early 1900s technologies. IIRC, the existence of household electricity in some places would corroborate that evidence.
Plus, IIRC, there's other stuff that makes it resemble... I think it's called Meiji Era Japan, which would be around a similar time?
Unless you think Pokemon World is just THAT advanced that they were getting such tech centuries ago. But hundreds of years ago, was, IIRC, when the first Apricorn Balls were made, but I doubt they're that new, considering Laventon brought Pokemon from overseas. If Poke Balls were that new, while amateurism in a remote settlement could be excused, surely there'd be mention of them being a new technology made in the last few years, or that they're popular overseas.
I'm sorry to say that I'm not sure what Path of Tenacity is. Why doesn't it have a section in the Technology/Abilities section?
"Wall level+ (Galaxy Team's citizens shouldn’t be overwhelmingly below modern day Pokémon humans, though they view nearly all fodder Pokémon as a threat to their life[4])"
Uncertain if "fodder Pokémon" is proper terminology here. Maybe "nearly all Pokémon"? Maybe "all Pokémon, even weak Pokémon"? Maybe "all wild Pokémon" or "untrained Pokémon"?
(Not to mention by meaning, it could be taken to interpret they view all fodder Pokemon, but not non-fodder Pokemon as threats.)
Anyone have thoughts on potential rephrasings, please?
"Multi-City Block level for most members (Akari was seen as one of the Survey Corps’ best members when she only had a fodder Pikachu)"
Similar issue.
Multiverse level, likely
Multiverse level+ (Zisu, Beni, and Captain Kamado's Pokémon are capable of injuring Rei's team at its most powerful, which includes an extremely heavily trained
Dialga or
Palkia and other Pokémon who have been trained to be on par with them
[5])
While it is certain that Rei/Akari catch Dialga & Palkia, what makes it certain it's "extremely heavily trained", as opposed to say "potentially" so trained, given we accept stuff like Selene/Elio being able to beat Rainbow Rocket & other examples? & why such a phrasing of the justification? Would "masterfully trained" or such be inaccurate?
I suppose that begs the question of how Arceus describes what status to achieve. Does it tell Rei/Akari to become a "Pokemon Master", for example?
"However, once he stepped in and sorted out all their problems himself, their selection and means of creating such goods vastly increased, and can now develop a large array of equipment and healing items."
Again, is it certain it's Rei rather than Akari, given the player character's canonical identity is likely indeterminate?
"The Medical Corps is capable of crafting medicine for just about anything imaginable[6], even ones strong enough to outright remove a Psyduck's headache for a while[7]"
This phrasing may be overestimating of the capabilities, since all we have is it curing Psyduck headaches & its description of
"An astonishing medicine that can instantly restore health to any Pokémon. It is produced by an apothecary in Cianwood City.".
It may also be worth citing Pokedex entries or other information on why curing a Psyduck's headache, even "for a while" is a notable accomplishment.
"Weaknesses: The vast majority of people in the Galaxy Team are largely incompetent and dependent on Rei in order to make progress, and they only got to where they are by the end of the game because all their victories were basically handed to them by the player."
Somewhat informal language, worried it may be improper & the image only indicates Rei/Akari/the player character did so for Kleavor & Lilligant, even if knowledgeable members like us may know otherwise. Is there other info we can cite as evidence for this?
Apologies for going back to the Technology/Abilities section, but I felt it worthwhile due to my stance regarding this:
"minor Information Analysis via the Pokédex".
Do members of Galaxy Team other than Laventon have a Pokedex?
Do Rei/Akari/the player character have one?
Also, IIRC, is the Pokedex in PL:A not simply a notepad/journal handwritten by Laventon?
Does having a bunch of likely pre-written notes & possibly photographs count as Information Analysis, especially when they may not have even been made by the wielder?
Sorry about how long that was. Otherwise, it looks nice so far!
Hopefully this is appreciable, helpful &/or interesting!