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Well let's start. This will be more just my personall questions and comments on the pages as is. Also computer I am on is very laggy so please patient with spelling errors, I will edit it later when I can switch to my labtop.
Saw (franchise)
John Kramer
Reverse Beartrap
I am planning on adding the game profiles, along with the missing characters from the films soon. This will also include cleaning up and traps.
Saw (franchise)
- Summery needs to be rewritten. Besides the cringy nature of my original summery, information about Saw Rebirth and the video games should be added. I can do this, probably will, just explaining why i will do it.
- Pictures for both the games, Jigsaw (Film), and the comic should be either added to the verse picture or gallery
- Power of the verse should be edited with game info. I will get around to doing it soon.
John Kramer
- Why does John have traps under standard equipment? He isn't lugging it all around in his pockets. Just seems unnessisary due to include it on his profile.
- Possibly add Prep and Poison Manip to his profile. Poison is used in the Flamable Jelly trap and it wasn't because of the jelly meaning Jigsaw had to incert it into the victims bood stream via unknown means. Prep is obvious with his planning for traps, predicting all possible outcomes and countering it, etc.
- Should game or comic feats be on his profile? They are non-canon sourses so should the be their own keys or no?
- Possibly give John and maybe Mark a prep key. This could possibly be a way to include trap feats on their profiles. Mark would likely have more than John due to things like turrets, explosives, etc that he uses when he controls the game. I can accumulate feats for both if it is allowed.
- Should PII have his own profile or should it be a seprate key under Mark Hoffma due to supposably being MH. That may be a fan theory, i will have to check if it was confirmed or not.
Reverse Beartrap
- Is the damage it does only 9-C or is it higher? Iirc crushing a skull is wall level, correct?
- While I like the trap, it seems more like a situation than a weapon. Requires outside sourses and other things. Other than that let's go through this profile.
- Tier: 9-B=Is burning off skin a 9-B feat?
- Durability: Wall level=How? It is just jelly.
- Range: Tens of Meters= Uh...really? that is just the length of the room. The jelly isn't burning the entire room. If we say the trap is the entire room, yes, but again it is more of a situation. It would be like making a profile for the Bathroom trap, which if this is allowed to stay i just might.
- Abbilities: Not so much. Fire Manipulation is a no, due to the Jelly just being flamable, and requires matches or some external force to actually be inflamed. Poison Manipulation is also a no do to it taking place before a victim is placed in the trap.
I am planning on adding the game profiles, along with the missing characters from the films soon. This will also include cleaning up and traps.