Walter White crt

[Roachman40]

the rewrite is here

everything is fairly self explanatory on it

 

[Armorchompy]

jesdner

 

[Abstractions]

Looks good enough, I can appreciate the effort in sourcing which episodes you get information from which is always welcome.

 

[Armorchompy]

math

 

[Armorchompy]

(seems good btw)

 

[Shmooply]

jester we gotta rework my profile for gsustavro

i agree mr black

 

[Colonel_Krukov]

Looks good

 

[ElixirBlue]

Looks good, just need the explosion calc accepted

 

[XXKINGXX69]

Disagree all outliers and hyperbole tbh

 

[Roachman40]

explain

 

[Gewsbumpz_dude]

This seems to be an inoffensive rewrite, Mr. Wide.

 

[Roachman40]

Disagree all outliers and hyperbole tbh

I am not sure what you mean by hyperbole, as walt has been shown to do all the stuff on the profile.

I am not sure what you mean by ‘outliers’ either. walt was capable of creating 9-B explosions more than once, and the 9-C is self explanatory

if you want scans, here, here, and
here

 

[Roachman40]

This seems to be an inoffensive rewrite, Mr. Wide.

thanj you jesser

 

[CrimsonStarFallen]

Woay mr whit nice profile

Anyway this is good.

 

[Lonkitt]

The rewrite could use some format and grammar edits, but the sourcing is very professional and generally the information conveyed on the page is much better than what we currently have. Though I might rephrase his physical AP/Durability like this

Attack Potency: Human level (Is a normal human with no outstanding feats of a greater physicality. Fought Jesse Pinkman on three separate occasions, generally dominating him in their third scuffle)

Durability: Human level (Has been beaten and choked by Jesse in their fights. Was easily overwhelmed by Hank Schrader and Mike Ehrmantraut on separate occasions even after just once punch)

Aside from that, the profile looks good. Nice to see we finally have calcs for his equipment

 

[Roachman40]

The rewrite could use some format and grammar edits, but the sourcing is very professional and generally the information conveyed on the page is much better than what we currently have. Though I might rephrase his physical AP/Durability like this

Attack Potency: Human level (Is a normal human with no outstanding feats of a greater physicality. Fought Jesse Pinkman on three separate occasions, generally dominating him in their third scuffle)

Durability: Human level (Has been beaten and choked by Jesse in their fights. Was easily overwhelmed by Hank Schrader and Mike Ehrmantraut on separate occasions even after just once punch)

sure, that seems ok

It seems we have enough agreements, I am going to add this.

this can be closed now