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[Lightning_XXI]

This is a simple and small, just about the wording of part of his profile

In his Vol 11 tab, D has the following description:

Conceptual Manipulation (Type 2), Existence Erasure, Immortality Negation (Types 1, 2, 3, 4, and 7), Resurrection Negation and Regeneration Negation (Up to High-Godly; D is capable of cutting the Fount of Life itself, and no God or Demon can heal from it's severance. D cut Valcua's fount of life, which was regenerated once Valcua fused with Valcua two, who in their fused state endured more hits from Glencalibur. In Full Vampire Form however, D once more cut Valcua's Fount of Life, and the latter was unable to heal again. In volume 20, D was attacked by 4 pseudo nobles, who possessed power comparable to him which was granted by The Sacred Ancestor. D was capable of killing them all to the point they could not resurrect. The fourth noble also showcased the ability to resist D cutting the Fount of Life as he was still able to regenerate, however even that did not save him for D managed to overcome his resistance. Furthermore cutting the Fount of Life has been shown to erase the target completely, such as the case with Toma, The Elder God, Gilzen after negating his regeneration, and Viscount Kraken.)

And then, few abilities later, it has this:

Enhanced Fear Manipulation, Non-Physical Interaction, Void Manipulation, Immortality Negation (Types 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, and 7), Resurrection Negation, Regeneration Negation (Up to High-Godly), Reactive Evolution Negation, Adaptation Negation, and Resistance Negation with Miracle Bloodlight (Gilzen was able to resist the aura and powers of a serious D, remaining unaffected by D's fear inducing aura, the affects of his sword attacks, and even his regeneration negation. Only with outside help from Budges was D able to overcome Gilzen's resistances and kill him. However Gilzen came back, evolving and adapting to a form even more powerful than before, building even stronger resistances to D's powers, and being able to shrug off having his resistances negated. It was then that D used his ability, Miracle Bloodlight, which negated all of Gilzen's power such as his regeneration, evolution, and resistances, allowing D to kill him by piercing his heart. Furthermore, this ability was also able to make Budges feel as if his formless body was being torn apart, which D was unable to hit prior despite him being able to harm non-corporeals, souls, spirits, dreams, abstracts, nothingness, etc. In a later novel, D fought "The Thing", which was the fusion of a human, and OSB, and a Noble, with it's abilities allowing it to survive it's fount of life being severed, and can absorb energy above it's physical strength. However once D went Full Vampire Mode and used Miracle Bloodlight, he was able to kill it off.)

I understand it is via the Miracle Bloodlight, but I believe it could be better explained with just a single mention of all of these abilities, so my suggestion is:

Conceptual Manipulation (Type 2), Existence Erasure, Immortality Negation (Types 1, 2, 3, 4, and 7), Resurrection Negation and Regeneration Negation (Up to High-Godly; D is capable of cutting the Fount of Life itself, and no God or Demon can heal from it's severance. D cut Valcua's fount of life, which was regenerated once Valcua fused with Valcua two, who in their fused state endured more hits from Glencalibur. In Full Vampire Form however, D once more cut Valcua's Fount of Life, and the latter was unable to heal again. In volume 20, D was attacked by 4 pseudo nobles, who possessed power comparable to him which was granted by The Sacred Ancestor. D was capable of killing them all to the point they could not resurrect. The fourth noble also showcased the ability to resist D cutting the Fount of Life as he was still able to regenerate, however even that did not save him for D managed to overcome his resistance. Furthermore cutting the Fount of Life has been shown to erase the target completely, such as the case with Toma, The Elder God, Gilzen after negating his regeneration, and Viscount Kraken. The Miracle Bloodlight technique also allows D to negate these abilities on a higher level, as it rendered Gilzen's abilities, that were able to resist D's negations, useless in their battle. Said ability also grants D enhanced Fear Manipulation, Non-Physical Interaction, Void Manipulation, Reactive Evolution Negation, Adaptation Negation, and Resistance Negation, as it could negate Gilzen's evolution and resistances, and was able to make Budges feel as if his formless body was being torn apart, which D was unable to hit prior despite him being able to harm non-corporeals, souls, spirits, dreams, abstracts, nothingness, etc)

That's all, I believe this makes the profile a little bit easier to read and understand, I wouldn't even make a CRT for this, since it's just wording stuff, but D's profile is locked just because he's Tier 1 and this makes everything harder

 

[ShivaShakti]

Seems reasonable enough

 

[BrunoutOriginal]

Looks good to me.