Pedonar
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First Playthrough
Base
You need a scan for Automatic Translation.
A description for his Accelerated Development ; The one in his profile is not enough? Cause he is similar to other characters in the wiki who got reincarnated/summoned in other worlds
Martial Arts ; I don’t really know what to write here lol
Weapon Mastery,
Acrobatics needs a scan/description.
with Master Mollang Technique
You need to write the level of regeneration, not just improved regeneration.
Resistances
You need a scan and description for poison manipulation.
The scans you posted dont really support resistance to magic/element manipulation. ; ok , i added more scans
Second Playthrough
Base
A scan for Precognition and Fate Manipulation is needed. ; well I don’t have a good scan for this
You need a description and scan Social Influencing. Cause he is the hero the people will believe him or stand in his side. Is it enough ? ; i added a descreprtion only and Improved Social Influencing in fifth playthrough with scan
with Endymion
Scans for Elemental Manipulation are needed. ok i will search for the scans later
Chaos Dragon Absorbed
It says he ansorbed the experience from the chaos dragon but where does it state he gains it's abilities?
Where does it say the aura causes fear? Without a statement, it just makes it seem like the guy is afraid because he sees the aura, not because the aura causes that effect. ; actually they mentioned madness in his stats, but i choose fear idk why. so i think i will keep it the same
Dark Energy
Where does power modification come from? added power bestow instead
Curse Manipulation and Sealing need scans. ; I will search for the scans later
Third Playthrough
Base
Immortality needs a scan/description. ; the immortality was mentioned in his stats, but I don’t know which type of immortality So i added type 1
I assume Supernatural Willpower is the Battle Spirit? Yh
with Holy Sword 2
Statistics Amplification needs scans. : Ok i will search for it later
Black Box
I get resistance to Soul Manipulation but where does Existence Erasure come from? I don't see it say anything about erasure. :
added more scans
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