There are definitely some formatting issues, also, "possibly" ratings are not separated to another key (normally to the key that reflects it), aka, for example, the Tier section should go like this: Here´s what you did:
Tier: 7-B | 4-A | 3-C
How it should have been:
Tier: 7-B |
4-A, possibly
3-C
Note how the 3-C and 4-A ones aren´t separated in keys (as they literally share it by definition), with the only obvious difference being the rating itself, and how the "|" aren´t bolded.
I also think you made the pictures too big, they should be just 400px each, unless I´m wrong, and check in Source Mode if the pictures have a "right" section instead of the default "thumb". If not, just change the word "thumb" to "right".
Also, why do you have to specify the version of the game for his age? Just skip that part and leave the number itself alone, unless there´s something pending in that section to be added...
His speed in his second key should just be :
"
Massively Hypersonic, Possibly
Massively FTL+ (Kept up with Garneff,
who could shake Tiki's Illusory World, which contains multiple suns)"
Lifting Strenght should just be set to "Superhuman", as that´s the default rating granted to anyone beyond tier 10.
And lastly, the rest of the ratings (Durability and Striking Strength) should be reflected in a similar way to the before-mentioned AP section.
Lastly, the
range (Please check that page, you used the wrong categories to use for this one):
How it is:
Range: City Class |
Multi-Solar System Class |
Galaxy Class
How it should be:
Range: Several meters | Interstellar, possibly Galactic
Note how this section isn´t bolded beyond the link itself.
Note that the speed and Range likely are an exaggeration, so please tell if he had to use such range to keep up (I´m talking about the 4-A and 3-C ones, of course)