Slender: The CRT arrival.

[Comiphorous]

A while ago, the slenderman page was up for deletion due to it's second key, but i present you with it's holy new and improved page

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Slender Man

We didn't want to go, we didn't want to kill them, but its persistent silence and outstretched arms horrified and comforted us at the same time...Children describing The Slender Man The Slender Man, also written as Slenderman, is the titular main antagonist of The Slender Mythos. It is an...

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[HenshinIntervention]

Sure, this seems good

 

[koopa3144]

Looks good

 

[TheShape03]

Looks good x2.

 

[ThanatosX]

Yeah, it's much better than the current page. Looks good x3.

 

[Eden_Warlock99]

Refs are supposed to be placed after "," and "." btw

Reference tags should be placed after other bits of grammar, such as periods, and commas. The only exception to this rule is when the last sentence is enclosed within parentheses; in such cases, references should be placed before the closing parenthesis.

 

[Comiphorous]

Bump

 

[Nullflowerblush]

Aura should be Social Influencing ("[...]its persistent silence and outstretched arms horrified and comforted us at the same time...").

 

[Comiphorous]

Aura should be Social Influencing ("[...]its persistent silence and outstretched arms horrified and comforted us at the same time...").

done.

 

[Comiphorous]

Oh right, i wasn't sure about this scaling, but in the Slender Man House Call, it reads

"My friend is herejus camein barely made up staairs got pictur locked door but it s right there inthe hall
dont look at its pictures it dosent want to be known about dont loo"

clearly, the locked door didn't stop Slender Man, should he scale to breaking open a locked door, or is that too much speculation?

 

[Comiphorous]

Bump

 

[Comiphorous]

Bump

 

[Comiphorous]

bump

 

[Tllmbrg]

Oh right, i wasn't sure about this scaling, but in the Slender Man House Call, it reads

"My friend is herejus camein barely made up staairs got pictur locked door but it s right there inthe hall
dont look at its pictures it dosent want to be known about dont loo"

clearly, the locked door didn't stop Slender Man, should he scale to breaking open a locked door, or is that too much speculation?

Would say it is, since Slenderman has a lot of ways to bypass the door

 

[Comiphorous]

Would say it is, since Slenderman has a lot of ways to bypass the door

fair nough.

 

[Lonkitt]

Looks fine

 

[Comiphorous]

how many staff agreements do i need for this to go through?

 

[Lonkitt]

This has enough. It can be added

 

[Comiphorous]

alright thanks the changes have been applied.