Selene page creation

The title is self-explanatory. I made a blog page for the character Selene from Marvel. The page is more or less done I just wanted final critiques of it so I know if I have to fix anything.

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Soulusboy/Selene_Blog

 

[The_Impress]

...are you unfamiliar with our format? This has so many errors with respect to that

 

[Everywhereman]

I actually am as this is only my second time attempting to make a page and I didn't get very far the first time.

 

[The_Impress]

Do you know the Standard Format page?

 

[Everywhereman]

Yes I found it.

 

[The_Impress]

So yeah you can check the places you messed up and fix thenm with that.

Anyways most of this is fine except the "Possibly High 6-C" for durability, Cable's gun aren't that tier default, and she doesn't tank them, exactly.

8-C durability looks very suspicious as well, since it looks like Cap is wrecking her shit

 

[The_Impress]

Also wait I just noticed... she doesn't have any form of immortality or longevity listed

 

[Everywhereman]

I'll try to fix the page tomorrow but regarding cable's gun the reason I said possibly high 6-c is because of in story reasons regarding cable thinking Selene is killing her fellow externals to grow her power.

 

[Everywhereman]

Also her immortality is listed I assure you

 

[The_Impress]

I'll try to fix the page tomorrow but regarding cable's gun the reason I said possibly high 6-c is because of in story reasons regarding cable thinking Selene is killing her fellow externals to grow her power.

Issue is kinda she doesn't really tank it tho, she gets ****** up and then regens from it :v

 

[Everywhereman]

Ok would it be fine for that to be used as supplemental evidence for her regen instead of a durability justification?

 

[Confluctor]

Ok would it be fine for that to be used as supplemental evidence for her regen instead of a durability justification?

Yes

 

[Everywhereman]

Bump

 

[The_Impress]

Did you fix it?

 

[Everywhereman]

Yes it it should be fixed now. If there’s something else I’ve missed please let me know.

 

[The_Impress]

Fixes needed:

• Tier needs to be bolded, not italicized
• Why do you say she's Small Building level when she's shown fighting Captain America, a Building level character.
• Why are her Striking Strength and Lifting Strength listed unknown? You already give her physicals AND TK powers
• Image used on profile needs to be aligned Right, not be a thumbnail, and preferably a render (I'll do the last part later myself dw)
• References section is missing

 

[Everywhereman]

Ok, I've fixed the remaining issues

 

[The_Impress]

Reference section is still missing, add that and you're good to go :v

 

[Everywhereman]

And done

 

[Confluctor]

Watch out for wording. Such as this;

Type 1. Selene's body made of darkness takes no damage from Rachel Summers telekinesis or physical attacks, while physically beating Rachel to a pulp.

Should be (imo):

Type 1. Selene's body made of darkness.

You don't need the rest.

Also are you sure this scan is relevant?

 

[Confluctor]

This too

Selene accelerates her speed at will, at the expense of draining her powers

To:

Selene can accelerate her speed at will but at the expense of draining her powers

Also the following is mind manip:

Erased the memories of Emma Frost.

Also;

Building Level physically (Contends with Classic Rogue to a degree by absorbing her life force.

Rogue doesn't have a tier 8 or 9 key?

 

[Everywhereman]

I've made the other changes but regarding the last change would it be preferable for me to remove the statement about Rogue and use only the Captain America feat? Selene rarely uses physicals so there aren't that many feats to go off of for her physical strength.

 

[Confluctor]

Yeah that makes sense.


Rogue could potentially have a tier 9 key, but would be much lower

 

[Everywhereman]

Ok, I've removed the statement about Rogue. To my knowledge that should be all except impress finding the render

 

[The_Impress]

Oh you can post it, dw