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Prototype 1 AP/Lifting Strength Revision

Good lord that is a wall of text.
If it helps, I can shorten it by only including the clarification rounded brackets (or parentheses) to only the two keys instead, where it's only the first two?

(First one to showcase what it should do once the readers first read it, the second one to showcase where the Low 7-C with Musclemass multiplier comes from)
 
Tips:

-You don't always have to name all of his powers. Just say 8-A with powers, Low 7-C with musclemass, likely higher (or whatever), his powers section at the bottom of the page lists all of his offensive powers
-You don't have to say "can likely" for things we know he can do
-Don't have to define devastators in the AP section, that's what the power section is for, it's already defined there
-Don't have to explain the same reasoning for a power increase in every key after the first time (you explain how musclemass works in every key, anything after the first batch of reasonings is redundant)
-You can always use more condensed wording (ex. "was able to dodge lightning" can simply be "dodged lightning" with a link to the feat)
-" even higher with Musclemass multiplier, even more higher with Devastators" This ain't it.
 
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Alright. Devastators are hardly defined in Powers section, so I've had it defined in the AP section for now and removed the redundant justifications after the first AP section and removed the "likely" for "can likely". I can leave the rest to someone else for the grammatical formatting.

Edit: Did the final edit by removing the "even more higher" bit.

I think this thread is concluded now.
 
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