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Just finished a profile for Titan Mags Optimus. Can I get it reviewed?
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Optimus Prime Titan Comics profile creation
- Thread starter SpookyGunShip
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You should probably use Ironhide’s statement of being able to level a city.
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For a first go, it is not offensive, but it's not exactly decent either. Remember to use Source edits and lets do this.
From top to bottom folks!
- Is there not quite literally any other full body image I can go ahead and get rendered for you?
- Summary should be entirely overhauled, this isn't bayverse Optimus.
- Not how you do tiering, for a sandbox or blog it's {Low 7-C}} and for a legit profile it's {{Low 7-C}}
- Keys goes between Tiering and Names, seeing as there's multiple keys in the profile, you need to label them as such.
- Name shouldn't be bolded, and I have my doubts that Optimus was only ever called Optimus Prime
- Origin should be [[Transformers|Transformers: Titan Comics]], preferably referencing Optimus' first appearance
- Bold sections, it is done improperly.
- PnA should be deleted and ENTIRELY deleted and rewritten, it is so obvious that was taken from the Bayverse page. See Ulthane for how to do it properly in source.
- AP is all wrong, bolding is off, no references, no separation of keys, etc.
- Universal is from Bayverse.
- Speed is all guesswork, grounds for immediate deletion right there
- LS and Stamina have no justifications
- SS and Durability need to have keys
- Range needs scans and references
- Standard Equipment is clearly from Bayverse, it also has to be rewritten
- No Intelligence or weakness sections at all
