One Punch Man: Orochi Profile Revamp

[Recon1511]

Hello there.

My admittedly slow efforts of revamping the relevant profiles of the OPM verse in the wiki still continues, this time I picked Orochi.

His profile is severely lacking in all regards and doesn't do justice to one of the strongest characters of the series.

Current Profile:

Orochi (One Punch Man)

"Monster King" Orochi is an extremely powerful Mysterious Being and one of the lead members of the Monster Association. Formerly a human, he was a fighting genius who turned his back on humanity and was transformed into a monster by Gyoro Gyoro. Tier: At least 6-B | High 6-A, higher with Gaia...

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My Revamp:

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Spoiler: Changelog

• Made a new "Masked" key that scales above Gouketsu and Gyoro Gyoro. This is because Orochi made it clear he donned the mask and hid his true power from Psykos all along and the only relevant fight he had with the mask he was told to hold back against Garou.
• P&A Section order shuffled around, new justifications and references for all of them
• Note added regarding Orochi's martial arts
• References section
• Added Extrasensory Perception
• Added Possibly Statistic Amp as he saw Garou performing Awakening Breath
• No more electricity manip, this was pre-redraw.
• Gallery added for his techniques
• Expanded on his current gallery
• Lots of other little stuff

Any concern about scaling should also be resolved here, so wheter you think something should be added or removed please let me know.

Thanks to Kachon and Damage for their feedback off-site.

 

[Kachon123]

Looks great

 

[Coomandar]

6-b gouketsu is a suprise.

seems cool, btw.
i agree with it, as long as is the new scaling chain, there’s nothing to contest.

 

[Shadow_x007x]

I agree, but I wonder if you forgot to write his Durability in the first key.

 

[Recon1511]

I agree, but I wonder if you forgot to write his Durability in the first key.

No, in his first key his power is suppressed but I don't think his durability should change

 

[Coomandar]

No, in his first key his power is suppressed but I don't think his durability should change

Yeah, there’s nothing stating that he increased his own durability in order to withstand that amount of energy

 

[Maverick_Zero_X]

Revamp looks good

 

[LordTracer]

No, in his first key his power is suppressed but I don't think his durability should change

Even if the tier doesn’t change, he should still have two keys. Just make the first key’s justification “Should be no different from his true form, as restraining his strength wouldn’t affect his durability” or something like that

 

[Damage3245]

I agree with LordTracer.

Rest of the sandbox looks good.

 

[Recon1511]

Even if the tier doesn’t change, he should still have two keys. Just make the first key’s justification “Should be no different from his true form, as restraining his strength wouldn’t affect his durability” or something like that

Okay, it has been added.

 

[Recon1511]

I take it there aren't any other issues then?

 

[Recon1511]

Bumpy Bump

 

[LordTracer]

A few minor things:

• One of the references is broken.
• It could be helpful to add Statistics Values references to his stats, so anyone visiting the page can immediately find what values he scales to (if you don’t know how to do that, I can add it to the sandbox myself).
• This is completely unnecessary, but I think the page would look nicer if the two Masked images were in a tabber like how Genos’ BoS images are.

 

[Recon1511]

One of the references is broken.

I've got no clue in how to fix it

It could be helpful to add Statistics Values references to his stats, so anyone visiting the page can immediately find what values he scales to (if you don’t know how to do that, I can add it to the sandbox myself).

If you could that'd be great

This is completely unnecessary, but I think the page would look nicer if the two Masked images were in a tabber like how Genos’ BoS images are.

Done

 

[Kachon123]

I've got no clue in how to fix it

If you could that'd be great

Done

I got it.

 

[LordTracer]

If you could that'd be great

Done. The profile should be good to go now.

 

[Recon1511]

Nice! I'll apply the changes now then

 

[Recon1511]

Changes applied, this can be closed. Thanks for your feedback everyone, I'll try to do Psykos next her profile is really bad.