No More Heroes Minor Revisions

[Lonkitt]

Looking at the NMH pages, I came across a few minor things that could be added to update the pages. Nothing huge overall, but lets get into it


Travis Touchdown

In Travis' intelligence section, the following is mentioned

Was able to use FU's anger against him, rapidly getting him more and more upset until he lost control.

This is pretty much a textbook example of using Social Influencing to manipulate somebody into getting more frustrated, so I propose the ability is added to his profile like this:

Social Influencing (Easily angered FU, successfully getting him upset to the point at which he lost control)



Jeane

On Jeane's page, she has Energy Manipulation through the usage of Dark Star's Beam Katana. This isn't wrong in any way, but she actually displays her own usage of Energy Manipulation without the assistance of the Beam Katana. During her fight against Travis, she leaves behind trails of green energy during some of her attacks. She can also briefly surround her body in green energy. I propose her Energy Manipulation justifications get revised to the following:

Energy Manipulation (Occasionally leaves behind trails of green energy when attacking. Capable of briefly coating her body in energy while striking. Using Dark Star's Beam Katana, Jeane can control a dragon made of energy)



FU

FU's intelligence section says the following:

Above Average. Built a rocket as a child and could hide his true intentions from Damon at the time. However, FU is childish and instinctive, usually acting based only on his whims.

That feat is easily worthy of genius intelligence. My proposal on the revised version of his intelligence is fairly simple:

Genius (Built a rocket as a child, which successfully allowed him to return to his land)

Of course, this would also mean adding Genius Intelligence to his list of abilities


Conclusions

• Travis gets Social Influencing
• Jeane gets an updated description of Energy Manipulation
• FU gets Genius Intelligence

Thoughts?

 

[Armorchompy]

This is pretty much a textbook example of using Social Influencing to manipulate somebody into getting more frustrated, so I propose the ability is added to his profile like this:

Social Influencing (Easily angered FU, successfully getting him upset to the point at which he lost control)

Seems fair

On Jeane's page, she has Energy Manipulation through the usage of Dark Star's Beam Katana. This isn't wrong in any way, but she actually displays her own usage of Energy Manipulation without the assistance of the Beam Katana. During her fight against Travis, she leaves behind trails of green energy during some of her attacks. She can also briefly surround her body in green energy. I propose her Energy Manipulation justifications get revised to the following:

Energy Manipulation (Occasionally leaves behind trails of green energy when attacking. Capable of briefly coating her body in energy while striking. Using Dark Star's Beam Katana, Jeane can control a dragon made of energy)

I'd maybe rather list that as Aura.

FU's intelligence section says the following:

That feat is easily worthy of genius intelligence. My proposal on the revised version of his intelligence is fairly simple:

Genius (Built a rocket as a child, which successfully allowed him to return to his land)

Of course, this would also mean adding Genius Intelligence to his list of abilities

Yeah seems fair, don't really know why I didn't at least make that Gifted.

 

[Shmooply]

Neutral on Social Influencing, the other additions are fine though.

 

[Marvel_Champion_07]

I agree with Armo

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Armor makes sense to me.

 

[Shmooply]

bump

 

[Gonzalo]

I agree

 

[Armorchompy]

probably can be applied

 

[SamanPatou]

Yup, it's fine.

 

[Lonkitt]

probably can be applied

I’ll handle that right now

 

[Lonkitt]

Alright. I've added the revisions as well as took into account Armor's suggestion when doing so. Thank you to everyone who gave their input. I'll close this now