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I'm making a Nurse Ann profile (as you can see it on the recent blog posts) and i would like to see feedback from people to get better at this
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Is there a way to get help at making profiles?
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If you link me to the blog, I might be able to help a little.
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Firstly, I'd suggest making this profile into a sandbox. To make a sandbox, all you need to do is go to your profile and add /Sandbox to the end of your username. In your case, your sandbox would be https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User:BonnieTheBonnie09/Sandbox. That way it's stored in a safe place and has no chance of being deleted or anything. As far as the the powers and abilities go, explain and add a source to their immortality and self-sustenance. Unless of course, it's self-evident. Then simply stating something like (They're already dead, and thus can't die) or something along those lines could work. Whatever sounds good to you.
The "(Her Immortality makes her difficult to kill)" can be removed. It's unrelated to durability but would still be taken into consideration in matches.
Back up the sources you link to image-sharing websites. Since you only have one link in the blog so far, I've backed up the link for you, and would replace the one you're using with this one.
Link to all feats. We can't just take your word on it occurring even if you're being truthful. Plus, if the feat is linked, it's possible that it can be calculated to get concrete statistics.
You can outright erase the "Feats" section unless you want to link a respect thread there. Otherwise, it's not necessary.
Finally, make sure all the material linked is from one canon and not fan art or anything. I'm going to assume everything you linked is canon, but I know nothing of the character, so I could be wrong.
The "(Her Immortality makes her difficult to kill)" can be removed. It's unrelated to durability but would still be taken into consideration in matches.
Back up the sources you link to image-sharing websites. Since you only have one link in the blog so far, I've backed up the link for you, and would replace the one you're using with this one.
Link to all feats. We can't just take your word on it occurring even if you're being truthful. Plus, if the feat is linked, it's possible that it can be calculated to get concrete statistics.
You can outright erase the "Feats" section unless you want to link a respect thread there. Otherwise, it's not necessary.
Finally, make sure all the material linked is from one canon and not fan art or anything. I'm going to assume everything you linked is canon, but I know nothing of the character, so I could be wrong.
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"Firstly, I'd suggest making this profile into a sandbox." Alr
"The "(Her Immortality makes her difficult to kill)" can be removed." ok
"Back up the sources you link to image-sharing websites" There's only 1 video that i saw that linked one of the feats, and it didn't included the chain breaking feat, so i guess that, i'll still looking for it, and abt the last thing, thanks.
"Link to all feats" That's what i'm trying
"make sure all the material linked is from one canon and not fan art or anything" the yaguyi its the owner of the character, and the "draw my life" video was an interpretation of the original story, so it could not include the chain breaking feat.
Finally, with the "if the feat is linked, it's possible that it can be calculated to get concrete statistics." idk how to calculate
"The "(Her Immortality makes her difficult to kill)" can be removed." ok
"Back up the sources you link to image-sharing websites" There's only 1 video that i saw that linked one of the feats, and it didn't included the chain breaking feat, so i guess that, i'll still looking for it, and abt the last thing, thanks.
"Link to all feats" That's what i'm trying
"make sure all the material linked is from one canon and not fan art or anything" the yaguyi its the owner of the character, and the "draw my life" video was an interpretation of the original story, so it could not include the chain breaking feat.
Finally, with the "if the feat is linked, it's possible that it can be calculated to get concrete statistics." idk how to calculate
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If the video is only a fan interpretation, it shouldn't be used. However, it can be used if the author of the character acknowledged the video as canon or as a canon interpretation of the events that played out in their story. If this isn't the case, the video shouldn't be linked to the profile sadly.
Oh, I didn't mean you. I meant Calc group members (CGM). Or any other members who are willing to calculate the feat.
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I mean, the only version of the story i have is in spanish, and about the second thing, how do i contact them?
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If it's all in Spanish that might be a problem. But if there are visuals to go off of, it can be worked with. If there's no visuals, we'd have to get translations.
You can reach out to CGM's on the calculation request thread. Keep in mind it might take a while for anyone to take up the request, but later is better than never.
You can reach out to CGM's on the calculation request thread. Keep in mind it might take a while for anyone to take up the request, but later is better than never.
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I can translate it since i know spanish, but on what format? on an imgur image or or quoting the creepypasta?
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If you know Spanish, I think it would be fine to quote it. But obviously, make sure to post the image you're quoting.
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I'm making an "Epic Scout" Profile, and i would like to see your opinion (Dont mind the empty text, ill put the videos later)
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I'm unsure if it'll get accepted since there's already a profile for Scout on the wiki. Unless this Scout is different. If it's something fan-made, it would probably belong on fan wiki threads.I'm making an "Epic Scout" Profile, and i would like to see your opinion (Dont mind the empty text, ill put the videos later)
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But as for criticism; the summary is pretty long. It could probably be shortened a bit. Might want to actually expand on the intelligence section as the wiki would prefer something that doesn't say "self-evident".
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