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It's finally done .
Sacrified alot of my time to sleep but i finally got it done before the summer vaction come to an end. I have tried my best to make the sentences sound comprehensible as much as i can, it's alot much difference from the first time i posted it. But... still has no confidence because it has been a really long time ago since the time i last made a revision thread =.= so can you guy check it out whether it look good enough to post on the forum ?
Sacrified alot of my time to sleep but i finally got it done before the summer vaction come to an end. I have tried my best to make the sentences sound comprehensible as much as i can, it's alot much difference from the first time i posted it. But... still has no confidence because it has been a really long time ago since the time i last made a revision thread =.= so can you guy check it out whether it look good enough to post on the forum ?