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[Gemmysaur]

Good lord. October 2017 -> June 2018

Dem necro.

Let me just say it now, it's frowned upon to bump old threads (and it is a rule not to bump versus threads without notable arguments to share), but I will let this one go since it doesn't really do anything much, and I might find others making servants amusing.

 

[Andykhang]

Name: Balance

Class: Saber

NP:

Maxwell's Demon: Instead of Hot and Cold, it's Strength and Weaknesses. The perpeptual machine bring all the strength in the world unto the user, leaving only the weaknesses. Thus, the world crumble as she became stronger.

Sarasvati's Meltout: Controlling the flow, so that no one could defied it. The flow of strength and weakness is kept strong due to this, so that she could delivered strength to herself and weaknesses to other.

...She could used this to give strength to other people too, but that's almost an impossibility.

Crying Warmonger(Inverse): Instead of getting stronger while wounded (aka not perfect), she get stronger the more perfect she's, relative to her opponents. For each wound and imperfection she dealt to her opponent, she absorb their strength and grew more perfect

Skill:

Melt's Virus (EX): Convert everything into strength and weaknesses, and then aborbing strength while leave out the weak. What remain is a kind of dark, slurry juice she could used to infect people, though she will never touch it with a ten foot pole...

Natural Body(EX): An angelic body that's perfect since birth, and in which she continued to build to become even more so. Of course, never gained weight is a given, but she could turn all the "weight" she supposed to receive into other people, giving them burden and obesity.

Collector(EX): Collect only the valuable and leave out the worthless, only the jewel and leave out the rock, only the finest article and leave out the garbage...her way of life sublimated into a skill that, not only discerning the value of it, but combining with her NP and skill, managed to dig out only the most valuable property of the object, leaving no imperfection.

Combo NP/Skill:

Rule of Winner: The Perfect, Inescapable Fate:

"The Winner keep winning, and the Loser kept losing"

Embodiying that concept, this NP continuously absorb strength into oneself, and weaknesses to others. As one fight on, she strike, delivering all the weaknesses into her opponent while absorbing strength unto oneself, continuously grew stronger as the opponent grew weaker. Until the opponent is nothing but a mere shadow of themselve, and she the most perfect of being...

However, in other for the loser to keep losing, the winner must keep winning, and the reverse is also true. If she somehow was hit, her mind waver, or she lost advantagous in anyway, her NP is broken, and she could end up in a spiral of losses which result in her defeated, so she much be careful.

Weapons: A sword ornate with jewelry.

Appearance:An angel of vanity, with a sadistic smile

 

[Monarch_Laciel]

I'm sorry, did you say inescapable?

ENFER CHATEAU D'IF

 

[Andykhang]

Don't think that someone would come to this again...it's nice though. The Servant is still incomplete though

 

[Andykhang]

Name: Bless

Class: Caster/Foreigner

NP:

Abyssus Draconis: Instead of "Dragon", it's "NP"

Knight of Owner:

Nine Lives:

Skill:

Clairvoyance (EX):

Collector (EX):

Solomon's Ring (EX):

Combo NP/Skill:

Even the World Recognize Me as it true Ruler

An NP that infected the world, just by living.

A continuosly activated NP, he "infect" the world with just his presence. Anything that even recognize his "existence" start to become his, and used by him. This NP also allow him to "denied" anything that would come into harm, and instead being directed back, due to the World actively trying to protect him. Of course, if an Anti-World NP, along with it user, come, not only would the world failed to protect him, he couldn't even make that NP "Recognize" him.

After all, a spoiled child can only be blessed so much.

Weapons: Nothing, as he already have what is needed around him

Appearance: A blessed young prince

 

[Gemmysaur]

King Arthur Pendragon (Proto Alter)

Class: Assassin


Stats:

Strength: B Mana: A

Endurance: B Luck: B

Agility: B Noble Phantasm: A


Personal Skills:

Instinct (A)

That of the Common Folk (B) - Is the ability of Arthur to blend in with the crowd manifested into a skill. With it, his clothing can change to match that of the land and era around him without degrading any defensibility offered by his armor.

(Skill basis: Shapeshifting)

Witch Hunter (B) - It is said that Arthur personally tends to slaying all witches and giants as he leads his military campaigns. Bolstered by his using Carwennan to slay the Black Witch by cutting her in half, it became a skill that boosts his damage against anyone that can be considered a witch; that being a woman who knows and utilizes magecraft.

(Skill basis: Giant Beast Hunting)


Class Skills:

Presence Concealment (B+)

Independent Action (C)


Noble Phantasm:

Carwennan (A) - The dagger that is said to shroud King Arthur in shadows, allows for him to command the darkness as his own. With it, he can conjure solid shadows as weapons he can either wield or throw, rank up his Presence Concealment skill when under shade, and use the shadows as a sort of tunnel he can pass through.

It is said that it is through this that he slipped away from his knights to spend time with a dirty, blonde child who he noticed was always there behind the crowd, watching him with seemingly unwavering green eyes of admiration, every time he went out in public.

 

[The_King_of_Prudence]

Name: ???

Class: Caster

Noble Phantasms: Gate of Babylon, Excalibur, and Unlimited Blade Works

Skills: Independent Action (EX), Eye of the Mind (True) (EX), Item Creation (E)

Parameters:

Strength: C

Endurance: C

Agility: C

Mana: A

Luck: C

Noble Phantasm: EX

 

[Monarch_Laciel]

"Caster"

 

[Andykhang]

He's probably a Merlin+CasGil type of Caster

 

[Hizack123]

"Caster"

True caster......just like how true archer only use sword.

 

[Andykhang]

This is my attempt to create the edgyest character in here, you have been warned.

Name: Edge

Class:Avenger (what else?)

NP:

Currid Coinchenn: The Armor of Edges. Normally appear as his based clothing, it revealed multiple edges and weapon once activated. The more the armor receive various negative emotion, either from himself or from other, the more power and edge is show. The opposite is true though, and that would turn him into one of the fluffiest thing ever.

Verg Avesta: The Book of Pain. This book recorded, and thus connect, every single pain the opponent inflicted onto other, whether directed or indirected. Not only what kind of pain, but also the cause, and who is the one feeling it, so this could potentially reveal the info of the villain of hatred dealt against the innocents.

Nursery Rhyme: In actual fact, the outfit, and he himself, is a Reality Marble, corresponding with the wish to be "everyone's Avenger". Any pain, injury, suffering that is dealt upon him, as such, is delivered to the armor instead, so unless you dealt an instant one hit kill toward him, the more damage he receive, the more resillient and powerful he get, until the deed is done.

Skill:

Determination of Steel (EX): Rather than feel no pain, he instead directly comprehend it, receiving the feeling without being dragged and blinded by it. A clear mind against the wave of hatred.

Demon King (A): Calling himself the "Everyone's Avenger", he could change his form to better suite his need for appearance. It's even applied to gender, since he is a non-gendered being in the first place, so there is a possibility he would become a magical Avenger girl.

Murderous Intent (A): The will to delivered vengeance, no matter the cost. He constantly pushed his body to the limit, regardless the pain. The pain itself is transfered to the armor, so the limit could be kept raising in respond, thus making the process happen infinitely. Only when he tried to suddenly pushed rapidly, and even taking in more pain to himself, would he have the danger of breaking up.

Combo NP/Skills:

Edgeblade: The Edge Of The Heart

"True edge come not from pain, misery, suffering, and the desire of vengence itself...but in comprehension of it. With baseless vengence and hatred, not only is the blade brittle, but it's dulled and jagged, delivering senseless pain that cut without target, and in the end harm yourself and what you love, on top of the innocents that they have harm. Only by understanding yourself, understanding it source, and having the base for your vengence, can you realize, and delivered the true edge from your heart to the soul of your true enemies."

Someone used to said that to him. Following that wisdom, it sublimated into this Noble Phantasm. Upon activation, he activated a field, in which all the pain the opponent have dealt into other's heart and soul, is realize and delivered unto the opponent itselfs, in the form of field and various weapon with edges. This delivered not only the sin of the past, but also the consequence of their action in the present and to the future, forcing them to experience pain and wound, from the beginning of hate, to the days the last person forgive and/or forget.

As such, this is a skill that harm more, the more their action hurt people and the more the scars remain, and only the most despot and corrupted receive the most, while innocents receive almost none. In fact, for the innocents who receive senseless hate, the damage instead goes to the one inflicting it instead.

Thus, this is the best form of justice, even against those without conscience, that he could think of. So that even when he himself is without hate, pain, misery, suffering, and the desire of vengence... as long as he could comprehend, and understand other's, he could be everyone's Avenger.

Weapon: His base outfit, which in actual fact is his "armor" made by the NP.

Appearance: Imagine the edgyiest character ever, complete with trench coat, black hair dark-liner, and piercing.

 

[Blahblah9755]

I don't think Nursery rhyme is really edgy enough, how about patchwork soul's version of the forest instead. if you want an edgy field, you should use something like the mist, or demonic defender of the state.

 

[Monarch_Laciel]

Impale people on trees in a forest of mist that blinds and chokes the life out of them

This is edge indeed

 

[Andykhang]

If I want only edge, I could do something like a thousand spirits of vengeance or take back what is lost. But Nursery Rhymes have that "customizable" quality to it that he could design customized edge for each people depend on what they do in life ( Like battlefield of sword for warrior, where each blade is the representation of the slain, or that forest of creepy doll for any campsite murder), like a RM version of Penance Stare.

 

[Andykhang]

Name: Beat

Class: Rider

NP:

Dromeus Komētēs: To be faster than anything, in a literal sense. It's allow him so that he could be "faster" than his opponent, no matter how fast they go, or how slow they inflicted on him. Safe to said, nothing in his tract could slow him down.

Enfer Château d'If: The ability to escape anything, even reality, simply by being "Faster" than it, so that it couldn't catch up and failed to retrister him, thus left anything being unable to restrict him, enable him to be free of all constriction.

Golden Drive - Good Night: His beloved car, sublimated into an NP. Aside from being fast, it's also have nice furniture, a Universal Tracker that's allow him to be where he wanted to, and a music player that contain unlimited number of Eurobeat.

Skill:

Furthest Earth: To be fast enough to jump dimension. This allow him to go on a roadtrip everywhere, accross dimension.

Determination of Steel (EX):

Civilization Erasure (EX): Restricted to vehicle, but any vehicle he touch is instantly redesigned to it concept, to suited his taste. It even be able to play Eurobeat, even if the player never contain one, or even if the concept of "Eurobeat" itself doesn't exist.

Combo NP/Skill:

FTA (Faster Than Anything) - The Man Chained by Nothing

Faster than Thought.

Faster than Time.

Faster than Fate.

And by being Faster than anything, he's unchained of everything.

A continuosly activated Noble Phantasm, signifying this man's way of life. It allow him to be faster than anything, thus creating action that's seemingly instantanious and defy reason (like for instant, being able to dodge the undodgeable). The more faster he's, and thus the more unchained, the more he lack presence in the world itself though, as chain also equal influence over it, so while it would make it convenience for him to "disappear" in between his course, it actually cost mana for him to "inflict" and drag upon his world to his speed, creating "friction" which generate enormous energy to be delivered to the world, creating destruction in proportion to how fast he goes. If not careful, the drag itself could even burn up his body, similar to how object in space burn up in reentry toward Earth.

Thus, he usually do it in a vehicle, in a form of his beloved car. While he could drive anything to be just as fast as him, rarely any vehicle could survive the drag. Only with his car, which can be said to be a part of him, can he tune with it enough for it to also experience his freedom, and also resillience enough to deal massive damage to anything and still be intact.

Thus, he keep travelling to anywhere, blaring Eurobeat everywhere he goes. Challenge in the contest of speed against anything, and chained by nothing.

Weapon: His car, so-to-speak.

Appearance: A casual man in blue jean and white shirt.

 

[Andykhang]

Here's another Servant, judging from the name, you probably would now who I was based on.

Name: Yathzee

Class: Watcher

NP:

Sha Naqba Imuru:

First Folio:

Viy Viy Viy:

Skill:

High-Speed Divine Words (A):

Incitement (EX):

Projection Magic (EX):

Combo NP/Skill:

Zero Punctuation: Brutal and Non-Stopped Critic.

"Seriously, this is a world where just speak swearword and horseshit count as a Final Move by some standard? Is this a ******* fanfiction where writer became god to have a massive dick contest?"

And such, and such... A continuously-activated Noble Phantasm, in which he see the Truth of everything, and judge by his own standard. Any fault, no matter how small, is magnified and bring out to light, in which just a slightest word to it deal massive damage. Dagger-and-chainsaw-like word is spew out to hurt, and example is bring out to daylight to critic people.

A fundamental NP used to critics, the more people failed to acknowledge their own fault, the more the weakness is spew out and multiply the damage. Even god and world can't escape the criticism, and weakness could be revealed to break.

Word Magic: His harshness, take shape. Word become solidified, object become realize,...The word he speak become a reality to physically and mentally damage people.

Weapon: His word

Appearance: A man in white with a white hat