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Hello, I was cruising around and saw some abilities that left me mindblown... (Part 3) So yeah, I decided to make this.
Verse - Classroom of the Elites
Profile - Ayanokoji
Part 1 - Whiteroom Key
This part is for the Whiteroom keys' abilities.
This part is nothing with the ability, but rather just the description is deceiving.
The entire last part of it being different from photographic memory is just "wank", and should just be renamed from "perfect Memory" to the normal ability.
Just straight out removal
I don't see any issues with the AD outright, but I don't see a reason why to keep the "enhanced" rating on it, so that should be removed.
Oh boy, now this is truly something...
Now the 2nd scan is even worse... I don't think I even need to comment on this, why it doesn't even deserve its own ability, nor to be an additional feat for it?
Part 2 - Current key abilities
The abilities for the Current key
While I don't disagree with the ability, some key parts are extremely wanky. (Analytic prediction)
While the novel uses some flowery language, it doesn't make up for how deceiving this is... Not only are they talking about a specific event, but they are also talking about the event where the classes are forced to expel someone. (Though I have to say, I don't think it would be that hard for Ayanokoji to realize that Arisu was planning)
Either way, this needs to be removed or heavily altered to better fit the actual feat.
I am explaining that this feat is basically just overplayed, and much more concentrated than the current description makes it seem.
Now onto this...
So yeah, this also needs to be reworded or removed.
Now this is mostly fine.
Part 3 - Current key resistances
This part is the most self-evident and made me do this CRT in the first place.
This should be pretty straightforward.
(Not to mention that Tsukihiro's profile is extremely "raw", and doesn't even have "Information Analysis" as an ability on the page.
Now moving on to a self-evident debunk
The worst part is that this is not even the worst part... Here is the more concerning manner, and it's bolded.
Votes
Agree - @MrTayman616, @Treeztarz, @TWILIGHT-OP, @Vzearr, @CastoriceTheFifth (I think?), @RoggerReggor (Some stuff), @FinePoint, @Dinozxd (Everthing else), @Vietthai96,
Disagree - @XxZetsuxX (Most stuff), @RoggerReggor (Some Stuff), @Dinozxd (Perfect memory)
Neutral - @Dinozxd (On kei scene and visualizing future scene)
Notes
This is a lot longer than I expected...
What is to be just deleted, and what's moved to intelligence feats, needs to be discussed.
Not touching SI, since I have not gained enough knowledge on that ability.
As normal, I will update the proposal alongside the CRT to improve it.
Regarding sleight of hand, I will handle it in my next CRT for the verse unless someone beat me to it.
Verse - Classroom of the Elites
Profile - Ayanokoji
Part 1 - Whiteroom Key
This part is for the Whiteroom keys' abilities.
This part is nothing with the ability, but rather just the description is deceiving.
The card parts fail to mention that it was only 5 at a time, with 10 rounds. (45/9=5 and 5x10 is 50, this math doesn't require much math skill.) What Ayanokoji did was not memorize a position of 45 cards; what he did was memorize 5 different cards in groups of 5 for 10 rounds.
- Perfect Memory (Was implied to have a perfect memory by a White Room instructor. Was able to remember positions of 45 cards and was 100% correct in naming them. In 3 years, he was implied to never forget anything, not even the memories made just after his birth. He could remember the first memory of him discovering his own hands and the ceiling of the White Room, when he was only a newborn and couldn't speak, He has shown the ability subconsciously absorb information and recall any of it at will. This is different from just a photographic memory where he can retain images since his perfect memory isn't limited in that way)
The entire last part of it being different from photographic memory is just "wank", and should just be renamed from "perfect Memory" to the normal ability.
Just straight out removal
I don't see anywhere how it mentions that this is a property of the Whiteroom, nor is it on its wiki page. So I don't see why it's assumed to also be a part of Ayanokoji's whiteroom key.
- Enhanced Senses (Enhanced Awareness - Should highly upscale this feat done by Yagami due to vastly superior training and the same curriculum till level 4)
I don't see any issues with the AD outright, but I don't see a reason why to keep the "enhanced" rating on it, so that should be removed.
Oh boy, now this is truly something...
First of all, the entirety of the description for the first scan doesn't match the scan... Second of all, I don't see how this ability meets the requirements for the ability since it's not supernatural.. Not to mention (I may be wrong), but this is the scene where some "mercenaries" were gonna fight him as a kid, so it's natural to say they are stronger than the average adult...
Now the 2nd scan is even worse... I don't think I even need to comment on this, why it doesn't even deserve its own ability, nor to be an additional feat for it?
Part 2 - Current key abilities
The abilities for the Current key
While I don't disagree with the ability, some key parts are extremely wanky. (Analytic prediction)
(This is from Y2 volume 6 btw, so even that is wrong)...
While the novel uses some flowery language, it doesn't make up for how deceiving this is... Not only are they talking about a specific event, but they are also talking about the event where the classes are forced to expel someone. (Though I have to say, I don't think it would be that hard for Ayanokoji to realize that Arisu was planning)
Either way, this needs to be removed or heavily altered to better fit the actual feat.
I am explaining that this feat is basically just overplayed, and much more concentrated than the current description makes it seem.
I just don't think this is a valid feat for the ability.
Just wanna remove the bold part, since it has no real prof.Ayanokouji also analyzes Hōsen from the sides and predicts that he was aiming to harm himself, something which cannot be predicted from the posture Hōsen was in)
Now onto this...
First of all, I don't think we are seeing the same thing...
This part is completely and utterly misleading again. The first one clearly said "dodge", and the other one implies that he won't even be able to fight Ibuki blindfolded.. Now, to give the devil's advocate, the Ibuki one is hard since the "struggle" part is undefined...
So yeah, this also needs to be reworded or removed.
Now this is mostly fine.
Just remove the better, and change the "strength" to "Physical capability" (I can't see the scan, but from my experience with the verse, it should be more proper.)
- Better Information Analysis (Can gauge the opponent strength by mere glancing and know what martial arts they are using with a glance)
Part 3 - Current key resistances
This part is the most self-evident and made me do this CRT in the first place.
This should be pretty straightforward.
Just reading the description should be a massive red flag, since we know well enough that no supernatural abilities exist within the verse, so the mind-reading thing is entirely flowery language made by Ayanokoji, something he does a lot in the story.
(Not to mention that Tsukihiro's profile is extremely "raw", and doesn't even have "Information Analysis" as an ability on the page.
Now moving on to a self-evident debunk
First of all, the current description is extremely misleading, since the scan says that he threw a feint (fake attack), and then after Albert reacted to it, he did his actual attack, so yeah...
- Analytical Prediction (Ayanokouji used fluid movements to make it impossible for him to be read against Albert who tried to predict Ayanokouji)
The worst part is that this is not even the worst part... Here is the more concerning manner, and it's bolded.
I don't see how throwing a fake attack is anything impossible to do in real life... Hell, we can do that even as kids.Analytical Prediction is typically achieved through methods of fighting skill and/or psychological skill, often overlapping with Martial Arts and/or even Genius Intelligence. The most mundane examples of Analytical Prediction are scarcely better than what's achievable in real life
Votes
Agree - @MrTayman616, @Treeztarz, @TWILIGHT-OP, @Vzearr, @CastoriceTheFifth (I think?), @RoggerReggor (Some stuff), @FinePoint, @Dinozxd (Everthing else), @Vietthai96,
Disagree - @XxZetsuxX (Most stuff), @RoggerReggor (Some Stuff), @Dinozxd (Perfect memory)
Neutral - @Dinozxd (On kei scene and visualizing future scene)
Notes
This is a lot longer than I expected...
What is to be just deleted, and what's moved to intelligence feats, needs to be discussed.
Not touching SI, since I have not gained enough knowledge on that ability.
As normal, I will update the proposal alongside the CRT to improve it.
Regarding sleight of hand, I will handle it in my next CRT for the verse unless someone beat me to it.
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