General editing notes:
Move citations to be in front of punctuation like periods and commas.
Swap wording like "able to" into "can" when applicable.
I feel like the division in P&A (Especially in the resistance section), is a bit unnecessary and arbitrary. Like how do you define exotic haxes here?
For citations, if you repeat the same source multiple times, you should do <ref name=InsertName>Source</ref> for the first one, and then <ref name=InsertName/>.
With <div class="scrollable" style="overflow:auto; max-height:400px; width:{{{width|100%}}}; background:transparent;"> and </div> you only need them outside the tabber itself, it will apply itself to all its sections.
Great
Acrobatics (Could
jump several meters in the air to get on top of a building)
You should probably change the wording to emphasize that it was done at an angle, rather than be a sheer height thing (Since you don't get acrobatics for just jumping high).
This should get an actual explanation.
Empowerment (Great's eyes become red when he is excited)
How is this empowerment, this seems like limited transformation.
Physiology: Analytical Prediction (His strength is
impossible to calculate)
I'm not sure this qualifies? This reads more like "This guy is strong beyond what anyone can imagine" and what have you. Also the other resistance sections are empty.
Burning
Analytical Prediction (
Tricked and predicted Drian would prioritize safety by acting like she was trying to kamikaze herself, which was two steps ahead of him)
How is this precog? Thinking "this guy will prioritize not dying while I pretend to do a kamikaze attack" is nothing crazy to assume, in fact she literally set the scenario up for that outcome to happen.
Homing Attack &
Statistics Amplification,
Darkness Manipulation,
Fire Manipulation (
Truth punches are seemingly a punch guided to the target; Burner takes away the fear and shows the path, the area goes
dark and is only showing her and the opponent, engulfing her fist with black fires. We see this several times and there's a
streak of blackness from the punch as well)
Does anyone acknowledge the darkness in-universe, off your scans it seems to just be a cool visual effect to emphasize her presence when she hits something, with nobody going "oh it suddenly became pitch black."
Drian
Acrobatics (Can now
jump higher into the air to reach the top of a tower in one bound)
Same comment as Great.
Technique Mimicry (Mastered Roberts technique in a short week
Missing bracket. Also wouldn't this Accelerated Development rather than Power Mimicry if he's just studying someone's technique?
Why is it both in skill and physiology? (I think it further shows why your splits are pretty arbitrary).
Roy
Firearms Expert &
Martial Arts (Is a great weapons handler and overall combatant as
implied by Great, after fighting him. ,
Superhuman Precision (Targeted
several projectiles with succession and has stated he doesn't misses.
Missing brackets.
Body Control (Could make his
arm much longer)
Wouldn't this better indexed as Size Manipulation?
Sleep Manipulation (Able to put to
sleep inner demons)
I don't follow the scan, he just says the demon inside her will lay dormant, we don't know if it's literally sleeping.
Kai
Extrasensory Perception (His
blood makes him feel the emotions of all the citizens of Graymark, and the disappearance of them. Could sense his grandfather
died)
The emotion sensing also doubles as telepathy.