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I was looking through all the Elder Scrolls profiles. A few of them are kinda messy but that's perfectly understandable and I can get past them; but these two profiles are just too messy for me to avoid. Perfect example "Wispmother
Lifting strength: irrelevant"
Irrelevant lifting strength is for 1-A characters; I get what the profile was trying to say; but just list it as unknown.
As for the wisp stamina: "irrelevant for ghost" not only is this messy but it's not true. You have to prove ghost lack the ability to get tired and it should be rated as limitless if they truly don't get tired.
The standard equipment should just be removed; if you lack objects you don't say it's irrelevant, you say they don't have any (standard equipment: none)
Now onto the biggest problem: the wamasu
Its profile is all over the place. First, it has Regenerationn but no level of Regenerationn; is it low, mid-low, or high-low? Plasma manipulation shouldn't have the note about being combine with lightning attacks as that is unnecessary information and probably isn't even worded correctly. Weather manipulation should just be removed, it doesn't control the weather it just makes favorable conditions for those weathers. And it probably should have non combat applicable statistics amplification due to getting stronger during lightning storms.
Onto its ap justification, (as much as I hate to say this) that's not small city level. Supporting a small city is thousands of times inferior than actually being a city (like how Hercules can hold the entire atmosphere yet is only island level, but destroying the atmosphere is 6-B or 6-A). So destroying that support shouldn't compare to destroying the city. Also the way it destroyed the support makes it seem more like a chain react rather than the city being destroyed all at once. Even if it was small city level, it's reasoning is bloated. Just say he threatened to melt the support of a city; the stuff about the pirates and the location are meaningless.
Its speed justification is also bloated; now I do remember a Wamasu fought someone who could dodge its lightning so his speed is probably legit unlike its ap, but just say it can attack and react to natural electricity, the rest of the information is unnecessary and nonsensical.
"Of course, they are lightning incarnates, so they should have reflexes as fast as lightning"
That makes no sense and isn't even correct as we've had characters be light incarnate but be vastly slower.
It's striking strength justification doesn't justify its striking strength and should be changed to fight other Wamasu.
It's durability justification doesn't justify its durability either as master mages are 7-C. The Wamasu's lightning constantly flows through its body so just change the durability justification to something about that.
The original durability justification should be changed to a stamina justification, though considering how vastly superior the Wamasu is to most mages and Warriors (unless it gets downgraded), it probably won't be accurate.
Standard Equipment should just be removed; they don't have any.
Intelligence: They are super reptile monsters with a very predatory, territorial nature.
The part I bold annoys me so much, just say they have a predatory, territorial nature, them being lizards has nothing to do with it.
If I sounded rude throughout this post I'm sorry, but I've seen admin call profiles sh*t straight to the people that made the profiles so it could be a lot worse.
Lifting strength: irrelevant"
Irrelevant lifting strength is for 1-A characters; I get what the profile was trying to say; but just list it as unknown.
As for the wisp stamina: "irrelevant for ghost" not only is this messy but it's not true. You have to prove ghost lack the ability to get tired and it should be rated as limitless if they truly don't get tired.
The standard equipment should just be removed; if you lack objects you don't say it's irrelevant, you say they don't have any (standard equipment: none)
Now onto the biggest problem: the wamasu
Its profile is all over the place. First, it has Regenerationn but no level of Regenerationn; is it low, mid-low, or high-low? Plasma manipulation shouldn't have the note about being combine with lightning attacks as that is unnecessary information and probably isn't even worded correctly. Weather manipulation should just be removed, it doesn't control the weather it just makes favorable conditions for those weathers. And it probably should have non combat applicable statistics amplification due to getting stronger during lightning storms.
Onto its ap justification, (as much as I hate to say this) that's not small city level. Supporting a small city is thousands of times inferior than actually being a city (like how Hercules can hold the entire atmosphere yet is only island level, but destroying the atmosphere is 6-B or 6-A). So destroying that support shouldn't compare to destroying the city. Also the way it destroyed the support makes it seem more like a chain react rather than the city being destroyed all at once. Even if it was small city level, it's reasoning is bloated. Just say he threatened to melt the support of a city; the stuff about the pirates and the location are meaningless.
Its speed justification is also bloated; now I do remember a Wamasu fought someone who could dodge its lightning so his speed is probably legit unlike its ap, but just say it can attack and react to natural electricity, the rest of the information is unnecessary and nonsensical.
"Of course, they are lightning incarnates, so they should have reflexes as fast as lightning"
That makes no sense and isn't even correct as we've had characters be light incarnate but be vastly slower.
It's striking strength justification doesn't justify its striking strength and should be changed to fight other Wamasu.
It's durability justification doesn't justify its durability either as master mages are 7-C. The Wamasu's lightning constantly flows through its body so just change the durability justification to something about that.
The original durability justification should be changed to a stamina justification, though considering how vastly superior the Wamasu is to most mages and Warriors (unless it gets downgraded), it probably won't be accurate.
Standard Equipment should just be removed; they don't have any.
Intelligence: They are super reptile monsters with a very predatory, territorial nature.
The part I bold annoys me so much, just say they have a predatory, territorial nature, them being lizards has nothing to do with it.
If I sounded rude throughout this post I'm sorry, but I've seen admin call profiles sh*t straight to the people that made the profiles so it could be a lot worse.
