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how about now?Excellent work.
Although here are some minor issues like a weirdly phrased sentence at the beginning of the weaknesses section and a few abilities that should be bold but aren't.
Perfecthow about now?
A reference(s) is required. Although I acknowledge the inclusion of a scan, it is imperative to provide proper references per standards.Speed: Subsonic (Can avoid a processed Sybil's lunges, and fight her on even terms), Subsonic+ with Plan() (Can move at much greater speeds than normal)
Lifting Strength: Athletic Human (Can easily swing around the massive Transistor as if it were a normal sword)
Durability: Small Building level+ (Can withstand the Spine's attacks, which leave large craters in the ground. Can tank attacks from the Jerk enemy, which makes small craters with all of its attacks)
I fixed this part for clarity and grammatical correctnessRed has lost her voice and can't speak, although she can hum. While the Transistor can protect and heal her from lethal damage up to three times in a fight, an active Function will be rendered unusable each time this occurs. Plan() has a recharge period of a few seconds, and Red cannot use most Functions while it's recharging. Functions occupy some processing space in the Transistor, which means there is an upper limit to how much can be equipped. Attempting to process and integrate the Trace of someone who is not registered within Cloudbank will cause the Transistor to glitch.
The references are contained in the blog.A reference(s) is required. Although I acknowledge the inclusion of a scan, it is imperative to provide proper references per standards.
You just kind of swapped a few words for synonyms...I fixed this part for clarity and grammatical correctness
Not enough references
I forgot to add the usual "All unreferenced material comes from Transistor (2014) gameplay mechanics", my badNot enough references
What do you want me to justify, that's the default assumption.Average Intelligence is unjustified
I'm not sure I understand what you're envisioning hereYa might have fluffed up the tabbers in N&T
Then just reference "Transitor Gameplay" lolI forgot to add the usual "All unreferenced material comes from Transistor (2014) gameplay mechanics", my bad
There's something for her at all in Intelligence right?What do you want me to justify, that's the default assumption.
Is "()" supposed to be after every reference?I'm not sure I understand what you're envisioning here
Bro... That's just part of their names.Is "()" supposed to be after every reference?
Uh, she's a very successful singer, I guess? I don't really see that as a mark of necessarily intelligence, lord knows there's plenty of stupid ones irlThere's something for her at all in Intelligence right?
The functions just have that at the end, the entire game is themed after that kind of programming termIs "()" supposed to be after every reference?