Torture Princess: Fremd Torturchen Profile Creation

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Introduction

Hello. Recently I have started rereading Torture Princess: Fremd Torturchen and making profiles for the characters. This CRT is to go over the sandboxes I have created to see if they meet the criteria and maybe gather more input from people who are more knowledgeable or have read the series too.

Sandboxes

The following sandboxes include the most important characters that appear in Volume 1 and that only. The main characters and antagonists, essentially.

Elisabeth Le Fanu
Kaito Sena
Hina
Vlad
The Earl
The Knight

So yeah, that's about it. The characters each one scales to will be linked when profiles are made, and stuff like Tier code will be corrected to {{}} when published also, just a heads up and all that.

 

[Kanogami]

I think everything is fine obviously since I was involved with it. Though I think we should also add Danmaku to Elisabeth's page since she sent thousands of stakes to pierce the flesh monster which I think should count, and other than that I'm pretty sure the correct spelling is "Kaiser" instead of "Keiser" so that might also need to be fixed. I also still oppose the list ability format and will always do until the end.

And also, I finally finished the draft for the verse page here.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

I think everything is fine obviously since I was involved with it. Though I think we should also add Danmaku to Elisabeth's page since she sent thousands of stakes to pierce the flesh monster which I think should count,

Oh yeah, even if that doesn't, when fighting Vlad, she created hundreds of chains.

and other than that I'm pretty sure the correct spelling is "Kaiser" instead of "Keiser" so that might also need to be fixed.

Yeah, thanks. Just double checked and you're right.

I also still oppose the list ability format and will always do until the end.


And also, I finally finished the draft for the verse page here.

Might as well change it. As long as the abilities stay bolded I don't mind which is used.

Also yeah, thanks.

 

[Kanogami]

Might as well change it. As long as the abilities stay bolded I don't mind which is used.

Thank you very much. I also think the abilities being bolded looks better, I just hate the list format.

Also yeah, thanks.

Yeah, no problem.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

And also, I finally finished the draft for the verse page here.

Btw, could you make the cover image a bit smaller? It looks a bit weird on mobile since the "Contents" box is bellow the cover.

 

[Kanogami]

Btw, could you make the cover image a bit smaller? It looks a bit weird on mobile since the "Contents" box is bellow the cover.

Sure, give me a moment.

 

[Kanogami]

What about now?

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Yeah, looks much better. Thanks.

 

[Kanogami]

Yeah, looks much better. Thanks.

No problem. Also, shouldn't we call staff here as well?

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

No problem. Also, shouldn't we call staff here as well?

Yeah, we should. I already posted this in content promotion thread for more people to see but ultimately IG staff input is the most important.

 

[Kanogami]

Yeah, we should. I already posted this in content promotion thread for more people to see but ultimately IG staff input is the most important.

Indeed, let's just hope this thread gets enough traction.

Another minor thing, but I think we should also list Subsonic travel speed in Elisabeth's page, since sometimes travel speed can be useful as well.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Changed the P&A section and added Danmaku for Elisabeth.

Also will add subsonic travel speed like you suggested.

 

[Kanogami]

Changed the P&A section and added Danmaku for Elisabeth.

Also will add subsonic travel speed like you suggested.

Alright, there's also one more minor thing I'd like to say which is that I think the Resistance to Disease Manipulation should be at the end of the list instead since usually resistances are listed at the end. Also, don't forget to fix Keiser into Kaiser. (Sorry if I'm saying too much)

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Alright, there's also one more minor thing I'd like to say which is that I think the Resistance to Disease Manipulation should be at the end of the list instead since usually resistances are listed at the end.

Yeah sure that sounds fine.

Also, don't forget to fix Keiser into Kaiser. (Sorry if I'm saying too much)

Actually I'm incredibly bored so having to talk to someone is nice.

 

[Kanogami]

Actually I'm incredibly bored so having to talk to someone is nice.

Ah I see, that's good then. I was afraid I'd sound annoying like this.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Changed "Keiser" to "Kaiser" on all the profiles and added Subsonic travel speed for Elisabeth.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Btw, could you add a "Calculations" section under "Powers of the Verse"? Something like:

== Calculations ==
[[User blog:StorytellingDemonKing/A flesh monster destroys a castles wall|A flesh monster destroys a stone castles wall]]: '''949016250J or 0.22682032743786 Tons Of TNT (Small Building level+)'''

 

[Kanogami]

Btw, could you add a "Calculations" section under "Powers of the Verse"? Something like:

Yeah sure, give me a moment.

 

[Kanogami]

Alright, I added it. There's also another minor thing I thought, but shouldn't Hina have Inorganic Physiology or something along those lines considering she's an automaton? Other than that I think that should be everything, I have no other suggestions as of now.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Alright, I added it. There's also another minor thing I thought, but shouldn't Hina have Inorganic Physiology or something along those lines considering she's an automaton? Other than that I think that should be everything, I have no other suggestions as of now.

Yeah, true. I will add that.

 

[Kanogami]

Hold on a moment, there's something we nearly overlooked that I just realized. Shouldn't Elisabeth also have Immortality as well? Considering the fact that she casually survived a hole being punched through her gut and her pulling her organs out and regenerating all that. Honestly, I don't know how this slipped past me. And I'm pretty sure Kaito should also have Type 1 Immortality if I'm not mistaken.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Hold on a moment, there's something we nearly overlooked that I just realized. Shouldn't Elisabeth also have Immortality as well? Considering the fact that she casually survived a hole being punched through her gut and her pulling her organs out and regenerating all that. Honestly, I don't know how this slipped past me. And I'm pretty sure Kaito should also have Type 1 Immortality if I'm not mistaken.

Elisabeth, Kaito should have Immortality Type 1 and 2. Other Demon contracts should have Type 1.

 

[Kanogami]

Elisabeth, Kaito should have Immortality Type 1 and 2. Other Demon contracts should have Type 1.

Yeah, I also wanted to say that Hina should also possibly have Type 1 but I'm unsure, my memory is kind of foggy so I'm not 100% certain about that. But other than that, I think that's all. We just need to wait until staff comes and evaluates the pages.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Yeah, I also wanted to say that Hina should also possibly have Type 1 but I'm unsure, my memory is kind of foggy so I'm not 100% certain about that. But other than that, I think that's all. We just need to wait until staff comes and evaluates the pages.

Dolls can appear to wear down. Like in the castle of Feifdom, one of Vlads Dolls was stated to have a crack along side it's cheek and be "older'.

 

[Kanogami]

Dolls can appear to wear down. Like in the castle of Feifdom, one of Vlads Dolls was stated to have a crack along side it's cheek and be "older'.

I see, I swear I vaguely recall Hina saying something about living forever but eh that's not that important I guess.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Added Immortality types they should have to profiles.

 

[Dereck03]

First. Idk the verse but i evaluate the abilities and seems fine, also you will need calculations for the tiers and speed ig. Beside that everything is fine.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

First. Idk the verse but i evaluate the abilities and seems fine, also you will need calculations for the tiers and speed ig. Beside that everything is fine.

Thanks for the evaluation. For tiers, they have a calculation. The Knight scales above a feat his underling did (Will be linked on his profile when made) and everyone else upscales from that. As for speed, The Knight uses lightning and can even catch his own, which is accepted as MHS+ (Around Mach 1800 IIRC)

 

[Dereck03]

Fine then.

 

[Kanogami]

Bump

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Bump. Dereck already evaluated the profiles and said they are fine. If there are no more issues I can start creating the profiles.

 

[Kanogami]

Bump. Dereck already evaluated the profiles and said they are fine. If there are no more issues I can start creating the profiles.

Yeah, I'm pretty sure profile creation in the first place doesn't need evaluation so just having one staff evaluation should be more than enough. I think we can just create the profiles now and if there are any issues then it can be brought up later.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Yeah, I'm pretty sure profile creation in the first place doesn't need evaluation so just having one staff evaluation should be more than enough. I think we can just create the profiles now and if there are any issues then it can be brought up later.

Yeah, I kind of know that but I always make CRT's to be safe.

Created Elisabeth's profile

 

[Kanogami]

I also created the verse page, now what's left is to add categories.

 

[StorytellingDemonKing]

Made a general discussion thread if interested:

https://vsbattles.com/threads/torture-princess-fremd-torturchen-general-discussion.144673/