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Revision on Sojourn pt.2 (Overwatch)

Hi, Overwatch holy lord over here. If a profile looks good and it's not from OW2(Besides Mauga) chances are I reworked it.

Let's go.

  1. No references anywhere, normally I wouldn't quiver too much, but meet my standard of going as far as referencing the name and age, let alone all the other stuff
  2. High 8-C for Souj is unsupported by your profile, you need a read-through of her book to do her properly anyway. Her feats in Cinematics and the 'story' mode throw her in the 8-C, likely High 8-C bin.
  3. I know for a fact she has a lot more of a PnA then that, read her novel.
  4. The first part of her speed section already strikes me as circular scaling. Get rid of it and scale to her the folks in her mission.
  5. Class 100 needs a calc, not a feat that can easily be Class 1.
  6. That wouldn't qualify as Superhuman Stamina, but Souj has feats of Superhuman... in her book.
  7. Reference Intelligence and fill it with feats from her book. Also, tabber it for organization purposes.
  8. Sombra should not be used as a weakness for anyone. Her EMP is not what it says on the tin, I'll put it that way.
Should note, current Souj would be High 8-C, she can box OR-15s, but she'd have two keys and one wouldn't be that.
 
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