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Hello everyone, its new guy here again. With the success of the Ichigo intelligence page under my belt, I thought I could do it again with another character. This time, we will be focusing on a character who has some intelligence feats, but isn't acknowledged at all compared to Ichigo, and whilst I wouldn't blame those people to forget him, I want to address that Renji is also smarter than you would think, and his intelligence segment doesn't give propoer justice.
I propose the rewrite goes from:
Gifted. Renji is highly skilled in various swordsmanship techniques. He was trained by the 3rd Seat of the 11th Division Ikkaku Madarame when he was relocated to his division. Before becoming a lieutenant, his skills were great enough to fight on par with Ikkaku's Shikai and earn the rank of 6th Seat Officer in the 11th Division. Renji is able to hold his own against captain-level fighters, and is one of three lieutenants to have attained Bankai (alongside Chōjirō Sasakibe and Rukia Kuchiki)
To instead have it like:
Gifted. Renji is highly adept in 3/4 of Shinigami combat, being able to use them effectively when needed. Even his weakest department being Kido, he momentarily used that weakness into strength when fighting Szyalaporro. When using an incomplete Bankai for the first time in a battle, despite his overall inexperience, he forced Byakuya to a knee after Byakuya declared it was impossible to do so.
I propose the rewrite goes from:
Gifted. Renji is highly skilled in various swordsmanship techniques. He was trained by the 3rd Seat of the 11th Division Ikkaku Madarame when he was relocated to his division. Before becoming a lieutenant, his skills were great enough to fight on par with Ikkaku's Shikai and earn the rank of 6th Seat Officer in the 11th Division. Renji is able to hold his own against captain-level fighters, and is one of three lieutenants to have attained Bankai (alongside Chōjirō Sasakibe and Rukia Kuchiki)
To instead have it like:
Gifted. Renji is highly adept in 3/4 of Shinigami combat, being able to use them effectively when needed. Even his weakest department being Kido, he momentarily used that weakness into strength when fighting Szyalaporro. When using an incomplete Bankai for the first time in a battle, despite his overall inexperience, he forced Byakuya to a knee after Byakuya declared it was impossible to do so.
