Psyren P&A Addition

[Arkenis]

Had this done for a while but never applied it. Here I am, finally updating the verse (pages are awful)

Alright so this is going to go over P&A and the speed they should have at the end of the series.


Ageha Yoshina
Asuka Yoshina
Miroku Amagi

 

[Arkenis]

bump

 

[Xxiaa]

A fellow Psyren fan with an actual banger post? Agree.
Seeing another upgrade besides my own feels good knowing there’s still fans out there

 

[Kachon123]

Yo this is fire! I agree.

 

[Xxiaa]

Had this done for a while but never applied it. Here I am, finally updating the verse (pages are awful)

Alright so this is going to go over P&A and the speed they should have at the end of the series.


Ageha Yoshina
Asuka Yoshina
Miroku Amagi

Wait did you forget to add subjective reality to Miroku and Asuka?

 

[Arkenis]

Wait did you forget to add subjective reality to Miroku and Asuka?

check psi tab

 

[Xxiaa]

check psi tab

Bless your heart. Also noticed it’s missing from the current verse page, but could've sworn it was on there at some point. Maybe it was reverted on accident?

Psyren

PSYЯEN follows the adventures of Ageha Yoshina, a high school student who is chosen by Nemesis Q as a participant in the Psyren games. The games take place in a world known initially as Psyren, which is revealed to be the real world a decade in the future. Ageha and his friends attempt to alter...

vsbattles.fandom.com

 

[Arkenis]

bump

 

[Deceived3596]

Mostly everything seems fine.

I would change the Deconstruction into Corrosion Inducement. While it's stated to "disintegrate" overtime, it occurs after a lengthy process of rotting. It's through corrosive means that this disintegration happens. This naturally occurs in our world, and we don't ascribe Deconstruction to the corrosion process that eventually breaks down and disintegrates matters. We categorize it as Corrosion Inducement.

Both effectively "disintegrate" matter, but one does so through an overtime corrosive substance while the other happens relatively quickly, and through abilities which manipulate matter itself to reduce it into smaller, more fundamental parts.

 

[Kachon123]

Also, the P&A for Ageha's Black Nova in his Invasion Arc key says this:

• Power Bestowal, Intangibility & Conceptual Manipulation (Type 3; Nova is described as "the existing ties between the body and the spirit are destroyed... Transformation into a conceptual being"[21]. Asuka is in essence cut away from his spirit and body becoming an abstract being or "thought being[22]" as Miroku states for Ageha. Amamiya also calls herself a conceptual being while in the form)

Since this is Ageha's profile, it should be worded something like this:

• Power Bestowal, Intangibility & Conceptual Manipulation (Type 3; Nova is described as "the existing ties between the body and the spirit are destroyed... Transformation into a conceptual being"[21]. Ageha is in essence cut away from his spirit and body becoming an abstract being or "thought being[22]" as stated by Miroku. Amamiya also calls herself a conceptual being while in the form)

 

[Deceived3596]

Bump

If this thread doesn't get mod attention by later today, I will contact some mods so they can evaluate the thread.