Ordeal: Kimyo Physiology Rework

[Minaaaa]

The Ordeal pages on the site are pretty barebones , so i aim to fix it by first fixing their innate powers.

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Kimyo Physiology

Through all of this, I should have seen the red flags, painted red with the blood you would soon shed. But how could I have known… a comrade, a brother by bond, my best friend… this was the first day you took your first step over the edge. I should have reached out to you even harder. I'm sorry...

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MadamRider/NewKimyo

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Changes:
Removed parts:
High-Low & Low-Mid Regen: These are only applicable to certain people and not Kimyos as a whole
Enhanced Senses: This is never said anywhere and has no scan or chapter for it

Reworked Parts:
Superhuman Physical Characteristics
Regeneration
Chi Manipulation
Extrasensory Perception

New Stuff:
New Format and pictures
Rank Seperation
Renamed 'Special Cases' to their official name 'Sentinel'
Moved Talents to the new page (Talent descriptions come from the Ordeal wiki and seemingly comes from a now locked Discord)
Added the following powers;

• Healing
• Soul Manipulation
• Power Absorption
• Memory Manipulation
• Information Analysis
• Aura Suppression
• Density Manipulation
• Resistance to Temperature & Radiation
• Power Bestowal
• Paralysis Inducement & Aura
• Fusionism, Immortality (Type 2 & 3) & Regeneration (Mid)

Agree: @LephyrTheRevanchist, @Dalesean027

Neutral:

Disagree:

 

[Lloydblitzed]

I agree

 

[EL_xWatcher1234x]

Agree

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

The talents section should explain that these are merely classification and the powers listed are the powers that fall within that classification, and that each individual has their own unique collection of abilities. As the rework is currently, is making it seem like anyone with the Warp talent (to use an example) automatically has every ability there, which reading this, doesn't seem like that's the case (Takleo, the one Warp talent cited, only grants Teleportation of objects, for example, based on the description on chapter 107)

 

[Minaaaa]

The talents section should explain that these are merely classification and the powers listed are the powers that fall within that classification, and that each individual has their own unique collection of abilities. As the rework is currently, is making it seem like anyone with the Warp talent (to use an example) automatically has every ability there, which reading this, doesn't seem like that's the case (Takleo, the one Warp talent cited, only grants Teleportation of objects, for example, based on the description on chapter 107)

It was mostly supposed to be a general powerset those talent users have like shift users having transformation & since characters can have combinations of them. Though, warp specifically should just be teleportation since that's what both of the talents do

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

Still, better to explain properly.

 

[Minaaaa]

Would something like this work

While the application of Talents vary from user to user, Talent users usually have a shared trait between them as listed below.

Also changed Warp abilities to just Teleportation

 

[Minaaaa]

bump

 

[Minaaaa]

Still, better to explain properly.

Would something like this work

Also changed Warp abilities to just Teleportation

Are the changes alright?

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

Would something like this work

Also changed Warp abilities to just Teleportation

I suppose that's fine

 

[Minaaaa]

Bump

 

[Dalesean027]

this works fine

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

This can be applied then

 

[Minaaaa]

changes have been uploaded