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Ordeal Reworks - Part 0.5

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The (semi) first part of my Ordeal profiles reworks, reworking Sabito Heart and Leo Thomas

Leo Thomas​

Old Profile

New Profile

New stats (7-C AP, Class G LS, Subsonic Speed & Increased Range)
Reworked Intelligence (Genius to Average)
Changed scans to removed the bloat
Statistics Values & References
New Keys
Better looking format

Added Abilities
Sleight of Hand
Light Manipulation
Explosion Manipulation

Reworked Abilities
Fire Manipulation (Added more explanations & temperature value)

Removed Abilities
Stealth Mastery - Is just speed
Statistics Amplification
Creation - Changed to Weapon Creation
Damage Boost
Astral Projection - Just a visual thing
Acrobatics - Just flight
Awakened Power
Weather Manipulation - Changed to Light Manipulation
Red Ember Gym Training - Unnecessary
Durability Negation & Pressure Points
Reactive Evolution - Never stated
Summoning - We don't know if Leo has access to War State
Power Bestowal
Fear Manipulation
Void Manipulation, Information Manipulation, Time Manipulation - We don't know if he has access to this
Resistance to Blood & Disease - Changed to Corruption
Resistance to Fear Manipulation - Not applicable

Sabito Heart​

Old Profile

New Profile

New stats (7-C AP, Class G LS, Subsonic Speed)
Changed scans to removed the bloat
Statistics Values & References
Removed Key
Better looking format
Added section for Hisame

Reworked Abilities
Ice Manipulation
Martial Arts & Weapon Mastery

Added Abilities
Enhanced Senses
Sleight of Hand
Incorporeality (For Hisame)

Removed Abilities
Mist Manipulation
Disguise Mastery
Acrobatics, Perception Manipulation, Afterimage Creation - Condensed into Illusion Creation
Supernatural Willpower
Accelerated Development
Social Influencing
Power Bestowal - Already on Kimyo Physiology

Minor Kimyo Additions​

Things i forgot
A tier i forgot when remaking the page is the Royal Blood Tier or the Hands of the Ten Lords. These are Kimyos ranked 20 - 11
Additional context to their regen: Kimyos can fully heal their injuries within minutes. (Source: Chapter 93)
 
General editing notes:
Put citations in front of punctuation outside brackets.
Both pages lack a weakness section, so add that.

Leo Thomas
Cold Temperatures (Bjørnn stated Vinter produces such an “excessive” amount of Frost that only the Immortal Hide or the vessel of Ilios Adamos)
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What? I checked the scans, the explanation here is missing a chunk at the end.

Range: Standard Melee Range; Extended Melee Range via Weapons; Kilometers via Light Manipulation
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Shouldn't his Fire Manipulation gets its own range?

For stamina, range, intelligence, and so on you still need to divide them between the keys.

Sabito Heart
Ice Manipulation (Hisame Talent allows the user to manipulate unmelting ice for various purposes. They can create ice structures, ice blasts, to use as defense, to freeze opponents & for ranged attacks)
Ice Manipulation (Hisame can freeze opponents)
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I'd change the wording from freeze to encase, since he's not lowering temperature but just spawn ice around them.

Twin Swords.
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Unbold the equipment.

Intelligence: Gifted
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Needs a justification.
 
Tllmbrg said:
You still require those sections, just write down "None notable" in there.
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Added.
Tllmbrg said:
Yah but the wording does not make the scans clear, you need to rewrite the sentence's end.
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Oh, i saw what you meant now. i did change it to this to make it more clear.
Vinter produces an excessive amount of frost that can only be wielded by the Immortal Hide or the vessel of Ilios Adamos
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Tllmbrg said:
Shouldn't his Fire Manipulation gets its own range?
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I couldn't find a specific rating for it. There is one where he's shooting from a plane but i couldn't figure out how high up he was.
 
With the changes mentioned by Tllmbrg, should be fine now

However, I will note, be prepared to defend the ice sculpture feat to be able to scale to their physicals very soon, as UES stuff is being reworked.
 
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