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I created a sandbox for book version of Beldam. I thought it would be better if I shared it and got other people's opinions before creating it. How is it? Is it good, bad or very bad?
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(Needs Thread Moderator Votes) Beldam (Book) Profile Creation
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King_Dom470
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For the lifting strength bit just put Average Human instead of "Human level" and for "Peak Human level" just put Peak Human.
Other than that it looks good imo
Other than that it looks good imo
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Thanks. I fixed it.
TWILIGHT-OP
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IIRC, i heard blog post mustn't contain TIER
in them. So I think you hould it better to ask some admins/staff.
in them. So I think you hould it better to ask some admins/staff.
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On the standard format page for character profiles says someone can write a profile into a blog (or into a sandbox) before publishing it.
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TWILIGHT-OP
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U should add pic too
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I added the pictures. So, is the profile good now?
TWILIGHT-OP
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Well u should gets mods opinion rather than mine.
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TWILIGHT-OP
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Did u contacted mods?
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You should probably put scans in the profile (cropped screenshots of the passages you're referring to) alongside references. For the rest, profile seems good, although you should remove the colons and spaces at the end of text in parenthesis
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Thanks for reply. I fixed it and added some scans.
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Seems alright, yeah. Some format fixes to do but if you want I can do those when it's published.
ShockingPsychic
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One potential issue, i thought we weren't allowed to use KE calcs unless the character was at least Large Size type 1?
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I think it just needs to have Large Size at all.
King_Dom470
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It's the KE of her punch tho
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Actually, I also calculated KE of her whole body, but I just used the average walking speed of a human in that calculation. And the energy produced by KE of her fist was already greater than that of her normal KE.
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