NeedleM0use Revamp

[HonestlyBored24]

Da Profilez
Old stinky profile:

Sarah Henderson (Needlem0use)

Sarah Henderson (also known as Needlem0use) is the main antagonist of the Sonic The Hedgehog-themed analog horror series "Needlem0use", which serves as an adaptation of the Sonic.exe creepypasta. She's a girl who got murdered by one of her former best friends during a bar fight, after she died...

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New shiny cool profile:

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Da Changez

• Made separate keys for Real World and Disc World Sarah, considering… she isn’t Sonic in the real workd
• Gave Sarah a separate physical rating since not only is there no solid indication that any of the gang’s RW scales to their physicals, but regular ass souls with no control over the digital world can stand their own against Sarah, so it wouldn’t make much sense for her physicals to be 4-A
• Gave Sarah some missing abilities and some actual calcs for her sh_t
• Downgraded intelligence to at most Average because Above Average is giving her way too much credit
• Other stuff I can’t be bothered to go into right now just go look at the sandbox

So whaddya think?

 

[Diamond_Drone]

Flight (True Flight - Much like who she's based on, Sarah is shown to be able to fly, most notably during her fights with Kyle and Luther.)

Remove the first part mentioning who she's based on and the profile should be fine. I think inspirations should (at most) only be metioned in the summary, otherwise someone might think they are comparable or part of the same universe.

Also there shouldn't be periods inside of parentheses, that's technically bad formatting