Marvel Comics: Graviton Rework

[The_Impress]

Here.

Basically I remade the page from scratch, so I think next to nothing from the current page remains, except a few scans I reused in different places.

So yeah... how's your day going?

 

[The_Impress]

should prolly mention the few things I'm iffy on:

• I genuinely don't know what to do with speed, he fights everyone. Lowkey was tempted to slap unknown
• The keying is slightly weird to list on the file, but basically he goes through a multi-issue training arc that would involve like, piracy-level scanposting to show fully. I just posted his claim to be stronger and called it a day. IMO someone can read the issues

 

[Excellence616]

Looks good. Nice work

 

[SamanPatou]

Everything looks good, it's a nice and thorough job. I believe he may even be an Extraordinary Genius, between the inventions you listed and that feat about accurately mixing together various particles to form a breathable atmosphere, all done consciously, as said by the comic itself.

Btw, I can't read the "suffers from mania" scan, it's just too blurred.

So yeah... how's your day going?

I'm tired, sleepy and have to go to work.

 

[The_Impress]

Everything looks good, it's a nice and thorough job.

thx

I believe he may even be an Extraordinary Genius, between the inventions you listed and that feat about accurately mixing together various particles to form a breathable atmosphere, all done consciously, as said by the comic itself.

alright

Btw, I can't read the "suffers from mania" scan, it's just too blurred.

fixed, uploaded a higher rez scan

I'm tired, sleepy and have to go to work.

get well soon <3

 

[Hypertornado099]

I genuinely don't know what to do with speed, he fights everyone. Lowkey was tempted to slap unknown

Maybe "Unknown, likely hypersonic possibly some higher tier"?

 

[Hypertornado099]

What Planetary striking feats does he have?

 

[The_Impress]

What Planetary striking feats does he have?

stat amping :v

Maybe "Unknown, likely hypersonic possibly some higher tier"?

eh, sure

 

[The_Impress]

bip

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Looks alright.

 

[The_Impress]

Grace begins for me adding this revision (?)