Bobsican
He/Him- 21,625
- 6,271
I was bored and decided to check this verse, and oh man, let's just list the issues:
Arthur Penhaligon:
Anything else:
Overall the verse has considerable issues, and if no one's willing to clean it up, and more importantly, add scans, I think it may have to be removed.
Arthur Penhaligon:
- No sources whatsoever
- Way too many abilities with a "likely" to the point I feel like some parts may be wank (Namely the "lack of a soul" in the Human part, and Dura Negation in the Immortal section, also lol limitless stamina), I think this issue may even be verse-wide from a glance.
- The resistance to Fate Manip seems more like downright Fate Manip as he's changing his own destiny, rather than resisting the interference of it by someone else, maybe even either above baseline or with the resistance too depending on if it had the potential to overpower actual foreign Fate Manip or just resist it (Can anyone bring more context on that one?)
- Death Manip sounds way more like just Deconstruction, or even EE if described so, more context pls?
- Can anyone expand on up to what level the Regen Negation goes (for example, Low-Godly)?
- I probably shouldn't have to mention that being "above" someone that's fateless doesn't mean they guy in question also inherits Acausality type 4 of all things, I'm also iffy on type 1 as there's no paradox per say if a universe's space-time is fully destroyed and whatever and the guy in question isn't AFAIK.
- Moving in a timeless void isn't proof of Immeasurable speed by far, especially not with these barebones justifications (and more importantly no scans)
Anything else:
- No sources whatsoever, especially in anything related to the P&A section (And it doesn't help there's several high-tiered abilities like Law Manip, Fate Manip and several kinds of Power Nullification, among others), book verses have no excuses especially since we got the References standard to just quote a segment and page as a citation without compromising readability. Having 2-As running around with no scans also sets a bad precedent.
- There's pages of 8-Cs with no scaling explanationa at all such as this, and there's not even an explanation here. After digging, it seems the low-end is based on these calculations, which received no staff approval, and in fact it seems DontTalk finds at least one of them sus, but in any case it's very user-unfriendly as how it is currently.
- It seems 7-Bs in the verse scale to this, which has baseless claims as if we're expected to know what did they even do to be rated so (from what I can find with the AP calc, which doesn't elaborate on the so-called feat from what I'm seeing), and it doesn't help the link of the speed section is dead
- Some pages may be using stock images that are otherwise entirely unrelated out of no description given
- Surely way more, but I think the fact the list got this long is a concern
Overall the verse has considerable issues, and if no one's willing to clean it up, and more importantly, add scans, I think it may have to be removed.
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