"Carapace Technician" OC profile mockups

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I have quite a lot of mock-ups accumulated over time. They're not all structured correctly, but rather piled up in most cases.

Now i'm making a mock-up of Carapace Technician - post-technological-Singularity far-future bio-robot with superhuman strength and enormous amounts of Resistances. Despite his power, in his setting, he's equivalent of WH40K Chapter Serfs - that is, one of the weakest characters; setting is just that advanced. Other characters are even stronger.

I indeed tried to use my knowledge of biomechanics to imagine the most heavily fortified creature. E.G. thick exoskeleton is not only tough, but it also gives more strength, as muscles can be attached further from joints and more efficiently, therefore making them low-effort to use due to better leverage.

Now: what's it still missing, what i could use to better clarify AP and other characteristics? Advises about how to make OCs?

 

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Essentially, scaling chain would look like this:

• Likes of X-627, X-629 Leroy and Dark End upscale Stitch, to the point of making a joke out of him
• Carapace Technician, highly aggressive biorobot from far future, massively upscales likes of X-627, Leroy and Dark End - being able to one-shot and tear apart his predecessors
• Carapace Technician himself is so tough, that he's absolutely impervious to unarmed attacks of his own kind
• Weapons used by Carapace Technician can deal meaningful damage to other Carapace Technicians
• Armor worn by Carapace Technicians can heavily protect them from incoming weapon attacks
• Carapace Technicians get even stronger with multiple conditions, like "When enraged" or "When consuming oxygen" ("breathing" is special condition for them, as they're Facultative Anaerobes)
• Carapace Technicians are weakest character of their own verse, something akin to WH40K Chapter Serfs. Actual Space Marines of far future are massively more powerful than Carapace Technicians, and Named Characters are massively more powerful than baseline Space Marines.

So it's characters massively upscaling those who massively upscale those who massively upscale those who... Recursively.