Ben 10 profiles Revamp

[NXCHT.66]

Ghostfreak: Old - New
Zs'Skayr: Old - New

Spoiler: The changes

The changes are:
1. Update the abilities of both characters to make them more similar, as they belong to the same species.
2. Add some scans to abilities that were not originally explained.
3. Add new abilities such as:

• Enhanced Senses (Night Vision & Panoramic Vision; Can see in the dark and has an eye that can move around through the black lines on his body, which functionally gives him 360-degree vision)
• Limited Illusion Creation & Limited Dream Manipulation (He was able to create telepathic illusions in Ben's mind. He could also able to view and manipulate Ben's dreams while he was in the Omnitrix)
• Limited Temperature Manipulation (Comparable to Ghostfreak. Who can make people feel deathly cold by simply moving right through them)
• Shapeshifting (Could alter his shape and deform like gas by making himself into a grey, somewhat transparent smoke-like wispy form)
• Resistances to Extreme Cold & Cosmic Radiation (Could survive in the vacuum of space)

Ben Tennyson: Old - New

Spoiler: The changes

The changes are:
1. State that he has gained all the abilities and resistances of Dagon.
-Due to a previous thread where he was upgraded (Was accepted) for the reason that he gained all the powers and abilities of Dagon through Power Absorption. So, the explanation has been added in the P&A.
2. Add Tier 5-B and AP to him.
-This has actually already been accepted by this thread, but Ben's profile page has not been unlocked yet, so I am adding it this time.
3. Add quote and change summary (Credit to @GeneralSol16)

Omnitrix: Old - New

Spoiler: The changes

The changes are:
1. Add Tier 5-B and AP to it.
-The same reason as Ben (2).
2. Remove anything related to Alien X
-Since I think this should be a page for Omnitrix and Alien X already has a separate profile of its own, there is also a description that the Omnitrix possesses all of Alien X's abilities, which be a problem as follows:

• Untruth: Although the Omnitrix allows transformation into Alien X, that doesn't mean the Omnitrix gains all the abilities of Alien X. It's Alien X itself that already possesses its own abilities.
• Inequality: That is, why is it that only Alien X appears in the Omnitrix profile? Why are there no other aliens present? Therefore, since no other aliens are appearing, Alien X should not appear either.

Albedo: Old - New

Spoiler: The changes

The changes are:
1. Add key and abilities (feats + scans and explain)

Thats all

 

[GeneralSol16]

Ben Tennyson: Old - New

I agree with everything, but I'd add / change some things.

1. OV Ben quote should be:
- "Being a hero isn't about fame. It's about putting other people before yourself, or what you want. It's about doing the right thing, just because it's the right thing to do. It's about making a difference."
Since that's a better représentation of his character and motivations, it should replace the "It's just a Gadjet, be the Hero!" one.

2. His category.
For some reason, Ben isn't classied as a Superhero un the "Category:Superheroes" even when he's stated, acts and IS a superhero.

3. Improve his character summary.
His current summary is too...bad, is like the one who wrote it only read his Season 1 sinopsis, and not anymore.
It should be changed to somehow that includes his story after classic, that being UAF and OV. Something like:

- "Once an ordinary 10-years-old, Benjamin Kirby "Ben" Tennyson found a weird looking "watch" after it crashed in front of him while he was in a vacation with his Grandpa and cousin. The Omnitrix allowed him to turn into 10 different aliens, and he would use it to become a Superhero known as Ben 10. A few years and fifty more aliens later, he would grow up into a successful teenager and be not only Earth's Greatest Hero, but the Savior of the Universe and beyond."

 

[NXCHT.66]

1. OV Ben quote should be:
- "Being a hero isn't about fame. It's about putting other people before yourself, or what you want. It's about doing the right thing, just because it's the right thing to do. It's about making a difference."
Since that's a better représentation of his character and motivations, it should replace the "It's just a Gadjet, be the Hero!" one

3. Improve his character summary.
His current summary is too...bad, is like the one who wrote it only read his Season 1 sinopsis, and not anymore.
It should be changed to somehow that includes his story after classic, that being UAF and OV. Something like:

- "Once an ordinary 10-years-old, Benjamin Kirby "Ben" Tennyson found a weird looking "watch" after it crashed in front of him while he was in a vacation with his Grandpa and cousin. The Omnitrix allowed him to turn into 10 different aliens, and he would use it to become a Superhero known as Ben 10. A few years and fifty more aliens later, he would grow up into a successful teenager and be not only Earth's Greatest Hero, but the Savior of the Universe and beyond."

I added.

2. His category.
For some reason, Ben isn't classied as a Superhero un the "Category:Superheroes" even when he's stated, acts and IS a superhero.

Need to wait for the thread to be accepted first.

 

[Hirotoswnn1x]

Look good but ถพมด

 

[GeneralSol16]

I added.

Nice.
Reading the one I wrote, maybe some grammatical corrections would be needed, but looks way better even then.

Now let's wait if someone wants to take a look at this.

 

[NXCHT.66]

Look good but ถพมด

thank youkuy

 

[NXCHT.66]

Reading the one I wrote, maybe some grammatical corrections would be needed, but looks way better even then.

I fixed.