Arnold Schwarzenegger Characters Profiles (Part 4: Dutch)

[Ser_Hakim_Dayne]

The previous part was about John Matrix, Jack Slater and Conan, now it's Dutch turn, the protagonist from the first Predator movie.

Dutch old profile:

Alan Schaefer

Alan "Dutch" Schaefer is a Vietnam veteran and Army Special Operations officer in command of an elite rescue team during the events of the first Predator film. He and his team are hunted by the Jungle Hunter in a Central American rainforest during their mission to retrieve a foreign official...

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Dutch new profile:

Ser Hakim Dayne/Sandbox

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As a bonus, I also made profiles for Dutch's worst enemies:

Jungle Hunter old profile:

Jungle Hunter

What the hell are you?The Jungle Hunter's last words to Dutch The Predator known only as the Jungle Hunter came down to the jungles of Val Verde in the years leading up to 1987 to hunt and kill humans during the hottest summers, gaining quite the reputation for himself in the process. When Alan...

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Jungle Hunter new profile:

Ser Hakim Dayne/Sandbox2

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Cleopatra has no page, here is what I propose:

Ser Hakim Dayne/Sandbox3

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[Tllmbrg]

Dutch new profile:

Ser Hakim Dayne/Sandbox

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1987:
I do not think that qualifies for enhanced hearing.

Jungle Hunter new profile:

Ser Hakim Dayne/Sandbox2

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Acrobatics does not count as explained since jumping far does not count for that power anymore. It running without issues on tree branches should work though.

General notes for all the pages quality-wise:
Remove periods at the ends of paragraphs inside brackets (Same for the sentences in the weakness section) and have all citations after punctuation.

 

[Ser_Hakim_Dayne]

1987:
I do not think that qualifies for enhanced hearing.

Yeah, rewatching the scene it looks like he's just in his peripheral vision.

Acrobatics does not count as explained since jumping far does not count for that power anymore. It running without issues on tree branches should work though.

General notes for all the pages quality-wise:
Remove periods at the ends of paragraphs inside brackets (Same for the sentences in the weakness section) and have all citations after punctuation.

Okay

 

[Ser_Hakim_Dayne]

Bump

 

[LephyrTheRevanchist]

With the new changes, looks fine to me

 

[DarkDragonMedeus]

Looks fine with the new changes.