Arifureta Zero Volume 3 Revisions

[Celestial_Pegasus]

This thread is for upgrades for the characters from Arifreta Zero not the main series.

Miledi
Social Influencing- Miledi is a charismatic leader who is worshiped by her subordinates:

Snowbell sat back down with a smile. His subordinates all looked pleased with themselves too. H-Hey, Oscar-kun, Naiz-kun. What's wrong with Miledi-chan? She's actually acting like a charismatic, competent leader of a secret organization! Is this real!?
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 1​

"Because she glows as brightly as the sun. Surely you understand what I mean?" Meiru and the others thought back to the feats Miledi had achieved. Creating an abyss within the Greenway, supporting an entire island by herself, parting the seas, and even destroying a legendary monster. Her blazing spirit and overwhelming might certainly did make it seem like Miledi Reisen was a burning sun. Especially since she always seemed to descend from the heavens clad in sky blue mana. Even Oscar and the others were amazed by her abilities, and they were fellow ancient magic users. To normal people, she seemed practically godlike. "Those who have been saved by her personally worship her." It made sense. "Does that include you?"
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 1​

Petrification:

"Spark Plasma. Hellfire Tsunami. Micro Ocean. Celestial Flash. Pale Gaol." "You're casting advanced-level spells at that speed!?" Rasul blocked the barrage of thunder with a barrier, cut down the wave of fire with Ignis, blasted the tsunami of water apart with his mana shockwave, shot down the blade of light with his own magic, and blew away the petrifying white smoke with his shadows.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Electricity Manipulation:

"Ability nine, minimum power—" "Get lost already!" "Spark Plasma!" Miledi, Oscar, and Naiz's voices overlapped, and three flashes of lightning shot out. They kept their spells centered around them, making sure they didn't hit any of the prisoners near the wall. The three of them walked over to each other and formed a circle facing outward. Their spells combined to form a barrier of electricity.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 1​

Time Manipulation:

Miledi held up the necklace she was wearing. Hanging from it was a ring that looked different from the Treasure Trove ring Oscar had given her before. This was another one of Oscar's new artifacts, the Ring of Renewal. It was enchanted with the restoration spell Transient Infinity, which preserved something in its current state by continually restoring it to the state it had been in a second before as each second passed. Naturally, it wasn't as powerful as when Meiru cast the spell herself, but it was enough to restore Miledi back to fighting strength every ten seconds, which was at least enough to combat Rasul's artifact.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Absorption:

Rasul's bloodred shockwave parted to either side, passing harmlessly by Miledi. She'd deflected it with the fluttering, translucent cloth she'd attached to her shoulder. This was an artifact Oscar had made specifically for Miledi, the Guardian Angel's Raiment. It absorbed the shockwaves Rasul could emit and redirected them to the edges of the cloth. It was woven from Oscar's metal threads and was capable of cushioning the wearer against all sorts of impacts and magical attacks. So long as any part of the cloth touched an attack, it could freely control the mana contained within the attack to redirect it. It was quite large as well, so even Miledi, who was bad at close quarters combat, could get by just holding it up in front of her. Indeed, Miledi easily managed to block Rasul's enchanted sword with it as well. It deadened the impact of his swing, and while a few of Oscar's threads frayed, the cloth didn't rip. His artifact was sturdy enough to stop even Ignis. Furthermore, it was also enchanted with restoration magic, so it was continually repairing itself, albeit a little slowly. Rasul's eyes widened in surprise as the cloth managed to block both his shockwave and his sword swing.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Oscar
Information Analysis:

Unfortunately, he didn't have any time to catch his breath. A barrage of black tentacles, or rather, flexible black spears, bore down on him. He can control shadows too!? Thanks to his glasses' analytical abilities and his own focused analysis, Oscar was able to discern the true nature of the shifting black spears. The demon lord had turned his own shadow into an army of black spears. Judging by the fact that the ring on the middle finger of his left hand was glowing, Oscar deduced that this was the power of an artifact as well.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 2​

Portal Creation:

Lestina and her demons' magic had indeed hit the lower three floating shields protecting Oscar. But a moment later those spells had shot back out of the remaining three shields floating above the first three. Right back at the demons. These were one of Oscar's new artifacts, the Onyx Shields. They were of course quite sturdy, but more importantly, they had spatial magic portals affixed to their surfaces. Spells that hit one shield were shot back out of the corresponding portal on the other.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 2​

Thread Manipulation:

Oscar raised a gloved hand and said, "Omnidirectional thread barrier, activate." Blood suddenly splurted from the chimeras that had leaped at him from behind and from the sides. They'd been cut by Oscar's new and improved metal wires. These were so fine that you had to strain your eyes to even see them. He'd used them in conjunction with his regular, more visible wires to lead the chimeras into a trap and chop off their legs. Even if they felt no pain and regenerated unbelievably quickly, they couldn't do anything without feet. He then fired small, Lightning Field-enchanted daggers at each of them, binding them with electricity. He figured their own regenerative abilities would stop the bleeding and keep them from dying. Meiru could restore their legs later, so he didn't feel bad about mutilating them. The remaining demon soldiers faltered when they saw how easily Oscar had taken out the demon lord's supersoldiers.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Resistance to Heat Manipulation:

But the sleeves of Oscar's coat wrapped themselves around her swords and held them in place. To Lestina's utter surprise, Oscar's coat neither melted nor even caught fire. It just glowed faintly as it pushed her swords back. He'd added a new feature to his Ebony Coat— Diamond Skin. Back in the Schnee village, Oscar had upgraded his coat with Marshal's help.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Vibration Manipulation:

Still too shocked to react, Lestina could only watch as Oscar held up his gloved palm in front of her. He was far enough away that he wasn't touching her, but a second later Lestina's vision went dark. "Ah!?" As she flew backward, she realized she'd passed out for a moment. Lestina glared at Oscar as she crashed into the ground. "You bastard, that power belongs to—" Oscar had also upgraded his Sable Glove by adding the mana shockwave skill Rasul had used to it. "We've got someone who can convert mana into shockwaves too.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Naiz
Enhanced Senses:

"Vandre... Did you leave anyone but your wyvern here?" Naiz asked quietly. Naiz's magic allowed him to detect distortions in space, and right now he could tell there were multiple other living things inside the cavern aside from Vandre's wyvern.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 2​

Electricity Manipulation:

"Ability nine, minimum power—" "Get lost already!" "Spark Plasma!" Miledi, Oscar, and Naiz's voices overlapped, and three flashes of lightning shot out. They kept their spells centered around them, making sure they didn't hit any of the prisoners near the wall. The three of them walked over to each other and formed a circle facing outward. Their spells combined to form a barrier of electricity.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 2​

Weapon Creation:

"Your battle prowess is amazing." "Flattery won't get you anywhere... But well, you're pretty good too... Though it seems you haven't fought in a while?" Vandre's discerning eye saw through everything. Indeed, Naiz had originally been a warrior. His swordplay was polished, and he was clearly a veteran fighter. "Yeah, controlling spatial magic is pretty hard, so I've put my sword practice on hold while I try to get the hang of it."
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 2​

Meiru
Forcefield Creation

"That sounds like something a villain would say." Technically, she was a pirate. A pirate princess, in fact. "Fine, if that's how you want it... Torrential Bulwark!" Suddenly, the house Oscar was transmuting became covered in a dome of water. Oscar and Snowbell watched the dome form, confused. "You know, water barriers like these are soundproof," Meiru said with a grin.
	~ Volume 3 , Chapter 1​

Heat Manipulation:

It seemed until now Meiru had used water magic to stave off the cold so she could continue wearing her swimsuit. At first, she'd refused the coat Margaretta had offered her when they'd arrived at the Obsidian Tundra, but soon enough, Meiru had realized the tundra's cold was more than she could handle. Grudgingly, she'd eventually given in and taken the coat. The caverns themselves were inhabited by bug monsters that generated heat, so the village was a bit warmer than the surrounding tundra. Houses were especially warm since they had heating. But because Meiru had always regulated the temperature around her with water magic, she was exceedingly weak to the cold.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Regenerationn (Low-Mid):

Meiru had little training in the martial side of combat so she couldn't easily dodge or block blows. She was indeed the easiest person to attack. But that meant nothing in the face of her ancient magic. So long as she didn't die instantly, she could heal even fatal blows. And naturally, she had more experience restoring herself than anyone else. While she was the easiest to hit, the pirate queen Meiru Melusine was also the toughest to kill.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Electricity Manipulation:

Meiru disassembled her cutlass into a whip sword. She then accessed the Treasure Trove attached to her cutlass' hilt and brought out even more sharpened fragments to elongate her whip. This was a new artifact Oscar had designed specifically for Meiru, the Limitless Whip Blade. The whip sword wrapped around the two chimeras, binding them to Meiru. "Sleep for a while, my pitiful brethren." The two chimeras struggled to escape their bindings, but the more they fought the more the blade fragments sliced through their skin. Realizing they couldn't escape they instead turned to attack Meiru, but before they could, a powerful electric shock ran through the whip sword. Of course, it hit Meiru as well, but she cast restoration magic as it did, healing her instantly.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

General Additions
Dimensional Storage:

Actually, you really should make her stop eating... Oscar and Naiz both tried to silently signal to Miledi to stop Meiru, but she didn't notice. Instead, her Treasure Trove glowed as she pulled something out. While they'd been in Andika, Oscar had built Treasure Troves for everyone. The one Miledi was using was shaped like a necklace instead of a ring. Once the glow faded, a large map appeared in Miledi's hands. She spread it out in front of her.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 1​

Range Upgrade to Kilometers

Basically Oscar, Mieru etc did a combo attack that blow away clouds:

A cocoon of silver light enveloped the demon lord. A second later something shot out of his body and vanished into mist. At the same time, his attack dissipated. Their spells all rushed toward Rasul, and they hurriedly redirected them away from the demon lord. Their attacks pierced the sky instead, blowing away the dark clouds that had gathered around the capital. They disappeared with a flash, shooting toward the heavens.
	~ Volume 3, Chapter 3​

Even before this i overlooked that Oscar could illuminate the clouds above:

Unfortunately, Laus' warning was too late. Oscar's daggers already possessed terrifying destructive power, but these swords were easily ten times their size. "Not today!" Boutice jumped in front of Lelaie and activated his Rampart. Oscar's newest weapons slammed into the Holy Templar Knights' greatest defender. There was a resounding explosion that sent the nearby raindrops flying and illuminated the clouds high above.
	~ Volume 2, Chapter 4​

Also Meiru Melusine controlling clouds, scans of this on her profile. In short the characters range need an upgrade.

 

[Celestial_Pegasus]

Bump.

 

[HajimexYue_forever]

Bump

 

[Elizhaa]

I haven't read Arifureta Zero but I will give my shot here. Weapon Creation, I am not sure about it because I don't see much that alluded to clear Weapon Creation so I think more evidence is needed. I think Miledi's Absorption case would also give Attack Reflection since it is stated the cloth could redirect attack like in here: it could freely control the mana contained within the attack to redirect it. Everything else looks fine.

 

[Celestial_Pegasus]

Was supposed to be Weapon Mastery not Weapon Creation due to Naiz being a skilled swordsman.

I agree with Miledi's absorption being attack reflection.

 

[Elizhaa]

Understood; all additions look fine, now

 

[Milly_Rocking_Bandit]

Looks good.

 

[Celestial_Pegasus]

Cool i will just add these later then since i am about to go somewhere.

Gonna make a Vandre profile after, he is ansanely skilled martial artist, he mastered every martial arts there is at age 20.

 

[Elizhaa]

Understood.

Neat, making Vandre's profile sounds like a cool idea

 

[Qliphoth_Bacikal]

All these look good to me.

 

[Celestial_Pegasus]

One other thing is Apostles of God should have Immunity to Soul Manipulation, they are stated multiple times in the main story to be soulless puppets, and in Zero, Laus Bar, a guy who can literally see souls, says they have none.

 

[Qliphoth_Bacikal]

Sounds good to add also.

 

[Elizhaa]

The new topic looks fine.