FINAL SPACE: Help with profile reworks, calcs and creating a verse page

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Hello.

Currently this verse is pretty outdated, and has been outdated since Season 2. hell it doesn't even have a Verse page.

I decided to binge the series to try to help not make this verse outdated (And totally not because my short British friend wants his fav character to have a profile).

then I realized that, I cant do calcs for shit, there's way too many characters to make profiles off (alongside some reworks) and the fact Im not good at making verse pages.


so uh here I am asking, if there are anyone out there whos willing to help me, revive the verse from it's currently outdated grave.

Outdated Profiles:

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Ash_Graven

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Gary_Goodspeed

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Mooncake

https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/Avocato

Profiles I'm planning on reworking currently:
Mooncake
Ash Graven

Profiles I'm currently making
Lord Commander (In progress)


A Discussion Thread for this verse.

Final Space: The Final Discussion Thread

Welcome to the Thread-1. This is a thread for a extremely outdated verse. lmao

vsbattles.com

 

[Ztesrxgdfjcvgkbh]

I could make a verse page, and I could try to rework Avocato's page if help is still needed

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

my plans on reworking this verse is like kinda dead in a ditch now

 

[Tllmbrg]

I'll just comment on the new page you plan to release, since the rest is in a terrible state.

General editing notes
Remove periods in the end of brackets, so no doing .) in the page.
Move citations in front of punctuation like commas, semi-commas, and so on, but no brackets.

Base

Immortality (Type 2: Survived getting blasted by Mooncake, which caused part of his skin to fall off.)

You should give scans for this, since without context it doesn't come off as impressive enough for immortality, especially considering people can survive losing parts of their skin irl.

Energy Absorption (Absorbed some of Mooncake's power.)

Not sure if it that counts, it seems like another device was siphoning energy from Mooncake, and then he just temporarily connected himself to that power surge. At best I think this is limited.

Durability Negation (Attacking Internal Structures & Energy Manipulation: Imploded a Arachnitect Sentry from the inside.

Again needs scans, since without context Arachintect Sentry sounds like a massive structure, so for all I know he was just inside it blasting.

Existence Erasure (Erased a Arachnitect Sentry from existence after killing it.)

Needs scans since existence erasure.

Baby Titan Absorbed & Resistances

Body Control & Bodily Weaponry (Unconventional: Was able to turn his hand into a weapon.)

I'd swap Bodily Weaponry for Weapon Creation, pages like Shinichi who do a similar thing index it like that.

Cosmic Radiation (Is able to fly and speak in space without any major problems.)

I'd swap this for the Space Survival power and put it in whatever key this applies to first.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

I'll just comment on the new page you plan to release, since the rest is in a terrible state.

General editing notes
Remove periods in the end of brackets, so no doing .) in the page.
Move citations in front of punctuation like commas, semi-commas, and so on, but no brackets.

Base

You should give scans for this, since without context it doesn't come off as impressive enough for immortality, especially considering people can survive losing parts of their skin irl.


Not sure if it that counts, it seems like another device was siphoning energy from Mooncake, and then he just temporarily connected himself to that power surge. At best I think this is limited.


Again needs scans, since without context Arachintect Sentry sounds like a massive structure, so for all I know he was just inside it blasting.


Needs scans since existence erasure.

Baby Titan Absorbed & Resistances

I'd swap Bodily Weaponry for Weapon Creation, pages like Shinichi who do a similar thing index it like that.


I'd swap this for the Space Survival power and put it in whatever key this applies to first.

I think I fixed most of these now

 

[Mythic381]

Makes sense why you know JustSomeRandomGuy

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Makes sense why you know JustSomeRandomGuy

I did this cause of him. he literally just wants a LC profile

so I binged Final Space just to do so. and kinda ended up finding that the Low 2-C to Low 1-C and Immeasurable Speed stuff he says about the verse was kinda fraudulent.

 

[Mythic381]

so I binged Final Space just to do so. and kinda ended up finding that the Low 2-C to Low 1-C and Immeasurable Speed stuff he says about the verse was kinda fraudulent.

He doesn't really agree most of that anymore, mostly cuz of me

 

[ManhwaGrace]

Sure

 

[Ztesrxgdfjcvgkbh]

I know this thread is dead, but I made a verse page if you want

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

I know this thread is dead, but I made a verse page if you want

ive actually gotten pretty motivated to work on this again

and had made two speed calcs today.

heck someone even calced a feat