Star Wars; a Grievous Rework

My Boi Grievous gets his Profile reworked
Old Profile

New Profile

What's Added?
-Scans
-References
-Abilities Justifications reworked Abit
-Added Surface Crawling
-Added abilities for his Blaster
-Feats section
-Higher Rating with Grievance Striker
-Added B2,B1, Droidekas and Magnaguards as optional equipment
(reasoning: General Grievous is the leader of the Sepertist Droid army, and thus has access to all resources therein. Grievous most commonly travels with IG-100 Magnaguards and B1 Battle droids, and is occasionally seen with Super Tactical Droids, Droidikas, and B2 Super Battle Droids.)

Agree: @LordTracer

Disagree:

Neutral:

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

Hold on, did he like blitz this dude on some Bleach type shit here? Look at the way he's moving panel by panel!

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

I hope Legends Grievous gets a clean up like this at some point.

man, he has alot of content
Revenge of the sith (ofc)
Stand-alone mini series by dark horse comics
Clone Wars 2003 Series and Comics
He made one appearance in another comic if I remember correctly
Revenge of the Sith Novels
and I'm pretty Sure most of the 2008 Clone wars can be used with legends as well

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

and I'm pretty Sure most of the 2008 Clone wars can be used with legends as well

Eww, please no.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Eww, please no.

Everything that's not Seaon 7!

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Eww, please no.

damn

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

Hold on, did he like blitz this dude on some Bleach type shit here? Look at the way he's moving panel by panel!

Is this fitting for a calc? I swear to god it looks like he's spamming Shunshin or Sonido on some Shonen shit.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Is this fitting for a calc? I swear to god it looks like he's spamming Shunshin or Sonido on some Shonen shit.

Just have to figure out how fast Blasters go in Mickey Mouse!

 

[Arceus0x]

Superhuman stamina justification kinda ass. His stamina feat being not moving for hours isn't good at all. Man's below British guard level.

 

[LordTracer]

The stat value reference in his Attack Potency should go at the end of the justification, not randomly in the middle of it. Aside from that, the reworked page seems fine at a glance.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

The stat value reference in his Attack Potency should go at the end of the justification, not randomly in the middle of it.

fixed

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

Grievous' weird chainsaw droid bike thing he ran away from Obi-Wan's lizard on would be nice. What was that thing called again? Either way, Grievous needs Vehicular Mastery if it isn't already there.

 

[DaReaperMan]

Grievous' weird chainsaw droid bike thing he ran away from Obi-Wan's lizard on would be nice. What was that thing called again? Either way, Grievous needs Vehicular Mastery if it isn't already there.

Does he do anything impressive in either his ship or his bike?

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

Does he do anything impressive in either his ship or his bike?

He almost shot down Anakin and Obi-Wan in his ship once and he does actually have a whole ass fight scene with his TSMEU-6 personal wheel bike against Obi-Wan in Revenge of the Sith with it being equipped with blasters and a spare Electro-Staff, not to mention the thing has also been used by MagnaGuards and Commando Droids in the past to great effectiveness.

 

[Anonymous_Learner]

agree

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

The stat value reference in his Attack Potency should go at the end of the justification, not randomly in the middle of it. Aside from that, the reworked page seems fine at a glance.

hi, I apologize for asking, but can you ping some other staff into this thread?

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

hmmm bump?

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

bruh, why dafuq is this matchup showing my abouts

anyways @Phsccarvalho I think yo Crt magic didn't work

 

[Phsccarvalho]

bruh, why dafuq is this matchup showing my abouts

You posted the crt in article format.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

You posted the crt in article format.

oh, also realized I called this "matchup"

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

snisjdjd how to get out fo article format

 

[Phsccarvalho]

snisjdjd how to get out fo article format

No, it doesn't. Once the CRT is done like this, it stays like this.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

No, it doesn't. Once the CRT is done like this, it stays like this.

aww man, also how many staff did ya ask, when I ask you if you can uh get some staff here.

 

[Phsccarvalho]

aww man, also how many staff did ya ask, when I ask you if you can uh get some staff here.

You had already tagged the staff members who usually evaluate SW crts. I tagged Vieth too, but he only appeared in the lightsaber crt.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

You had already tagged the staff members who usually evaluate SW crts. I tagged Vieth too, but he only appeared in the lightsaber crt.

damn

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

My British friend who's a massive grievous fan, lend me your power and send staff to view this thread

insert some random ass light coming from above

 

[XSOULOFCINDERX]

So are we just waiting for staff?

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

So are we just waiting for staff?

yup, just one more

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

birmp

 

[Apex_Predator_GX]

yup, just one more

Hopefully any of them come here.

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

man. bump

 

[JustSomeWeirdo]

Looks good to me

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

YIPPEE, considering it's been a long time since post creation imma go apply it

 

[Nonynho]

YIPPEE, considering it's been a long time since post creation imma go apply it

Agreed, very unlikely for someone to come here and contest it lol

 

[Ruby_R_Dracula]

Looks good to me

the Changes have been applied, do you mind closing this thread? thx^^