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Ashnard
1) Minor grammar corrections.
2) Get rid of the "Wyvern rider" classification: Rajaion, as stated below in his profile, is a Dragon laguz (in other words, not a wyvern, this is relevant in the setting). Ashnard is not riding a wyvern (like, say, Jill and Haar), he is a "Dragon rider".
3) I dont get the Statitistics Amplification via Gurgurant, I thought we reduced that to game mechanics (like the random boost in defense from Ragnell). Was gurgurant stated to amp Ashnard?
4) If Im not mistaken, he should have a blessed armor in his standard equipment section.
5) In weaknesses I'd personally add: Overconfident, focuses only in strength in order to rate people leading to anyone strong enough to infiltrate his ranks.
And possibly weakness to electricity and dragonslaying objects for rajaion unless he was protected by a blessed armor.
6)In intelligence: whathealreadyhas + manipulative and treacherous (plotted to kill all the royal family to become king, used his own son as bait to capture rajaion and turn him into his slave).
7) Breath Attack: Rajaion, like any other Dragon feralis should be able to use this attack.
8) Resistance to Mind/Madness Manipulation (wasn't affected by the medallion's energy, which can drive normal humans mad by just touching it).
Edit: small thingy, Idk if we could add that Ahshnard is likely in his late thirties/early forties (given that he ascended to the throne 18 years before PoR). Rajaion is at least hundreds of years old.
1) Minor grammar corrections.
2) Get rid of the "Wyvern rider" classification: Rajaion, as stated below in his profile, is a Dragon laguz (in other words, not a wyvern, this is relevant in the setting). Ashnard is not riding a wyvern (like, say, Jill and Haar), he is a "Dragon rider".
3) I dont get the Statitistics Amplification via Gurgurant, I thought we reduced that to game mechanics (like the random boost in defense from Ragnell). Was gurgurant stated to amp Ashnard?
4) If Im not mistaken, he should have a blessed armor in his standard equipment section.
5) In weaknesses I'd personally add: Overconfident, focuses only in strength in order to rate people leading to anyone strong enough to infiltrate his ranks.
And possibly weakness to electricity and dragonslaying objects for rajaion unless he was protected by a blessed armor.
6)In intelligence: whathealreadyhas + manipulative and treacherous (plotted to kill all the royal family to become king, used his own son as bait to capture rajaion and turn him into his slave).
7) Breath Attack: Rajaion, like any other Dragon feralis should be able to use this attack.
8) Resistance to Mind/Madness Manipulation (wasn't affected by the medallion's energy, which can drive normal humans mad by just touching it).
Edit: small thingy, Idk if we could add that Ahshnard is likely in his late thirties/early forties (given that he ascended to the throne 18 years before PoR). Rajaion is at least hundreds of years old.
