War Fiend (Asa) profile update

[Acertainbcplayer]

I've made a new sandbox profile to update War Fiend Stats after the battle against Aging.
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[Acertainbcplayer]

A question, should the weaponification speed be placed at the speed section too? Is it perception speed?

 

[DrGreyman]

The weapon devils should probably be under optional equipment, she can get them any time but it was a last resort option

 

[That_moron2]

I think you forgot to type up the mountain level justification. I don't think it warrants two different tiers either, just a plain Mountain level should work

 

[Acertainbcplayer]

I think you forgot to type up the mountain level justification. I don't think it warrants two different tiers either, just a plain Mountain level should work

I think I should include city level too tbh, because the first shot was calced at city (which has a confirmed 80000 finger sacrificed), and only the second shot was calced at mountain level (which has an unknown amount of finger sacrificed). Where did I forgot to type up the justification? Oh, should I note it as "the second shot is faster" then?

 

[Acertainbcplayer]

The weapon devils should probably be under optional equipment, she can get them any time but it was a last resort option

Wait, ain't standard equipment is for anything the character can be expected to have on hand at any time? Well I mean that based on where Yoru is at (hell or earth) she would have different accessibility. Or is there any other condition for that?

Edit: Aight, I think it should be in Optional equipment too.

 

[That_moron2]

I think I should include city level too tbh, because the first shot was calced at city (which has a confirmed 80000 finger sacrificed)

Given the fact that the other calc is mountain level we can just assume that one was also. If she was holding back for whatever reason then that doesn't justify giving her a whole different tier.

Where did I forgot to type up the justification?

Its just "Yoru in an attempt to shoot the Aging Devil." That isn't even a complete sentence. In general the grammar is really wonky
Another thing is that you don't need to bold character names.

 

[ElajRuengies]

I think I should include city level too tbh, because the first shot was calced at city (which has a confirmed 80000 finger sacrificed), and only the second shot was calced at mountain level (which has an unknown amount of finger sacrificed). Where did I forgot to type up the justification? Oh, should I note it as "the second shot is faster" then?

The first shot had more panels because it was the first time the Gun Goddess was shown, so naturally more screen time would be spent on it for dramatic effect. The second shot had less panels since we already saw it.

You don't need both calculations. And you don't need a separate key either. All Yoru needs to summon Gun and Tank is the ability to make things weapons without touching them, which she got Post Chainsaw Man Church.

 

[DrGreyman]

Its just "Yoru in an attempt to shoot the Aging Devil." That isn't even a complete sentence. In general the grammar is really wonky
Another thing is that you don't need to bold character names.

yeah a lot of the wording needs to be fixed imo, it's kinda hard to understand

 

[Acertainbcplayer]

The first shot had more panels because it was the first time the Gun Goddess was shown, so naturally more screen time would be spent on it for dramatic effect. The second shot had less panels since we already saw it.

You don't need both calculations. And you don't need a separate key either. All Yoru needs to summon Gun and Tank is the ability to make things weapons without touching them, which she got Post Chainsaw Man Church.

So should I change everything in Post Aging to Post CSM Church then? Because I think a big change like Yoru losing both her arms thus allowing her to get gun and tank gauntlet to begin with is a big change that requires a separate key.

Also about separate key for weaponification ability too, I think it kinda makes sense because she doesn't need to name the thing, and a possibly range upgrade for her ability (which adds Telekinesis now too) which happen afterwards too, but I think I could change only this one to Post CSM Church because it looks like Asa and Yoru were having a bath in their destroyed apartment.

 

[ElajRuengies]

So should I change everything in Post Aging to Post CSM Church then?

Yes.

Because I think a big change like Yoru losing both her arms thus allowing her to get gun and tank gauntlet to begin with is a big change that requires a separate key.

They were gauntlets because Yoru lost both her arms, but she didn't need to lose arm to weaponize Gun and Tank.

Also about separate key for weaponification ability too, I think it kinda makes sense because she doesn't need to name the thing, and a possibly range upgrade for her ability (which adds Telekinesis now too) which happen afterwards too, but I think I could change only this one to Post CSM Church because it looks like Asa and Yoru were having a bath in their destroyed apartment.

I have no idea what point you're trying to make here.

@DrGreyman is right about the grammar. Someone else should be updating Yoru/Asa's profile. Your writing leaves a lot to be desired. Can a staff member lock this thread?

 

[GunshyFever]

I'll leave my thoughts a different time, but I disagree for the time being.