Surviving the Apocalypse CRT 0 (Main page, Profiles & Calcs) *Accepted*

[DeltaStriker22]

The main verse page, some profiles and some calcs for the manhwa Surviving the Apocalypse.

Main Page:

Surviving the Apocalypse Main Page

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Profiles:

Surviving the Apocalypse MC profile

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First Monster (Surviving the Apocalypse) profile

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Gu Jin (Surviving the Apocalypse) profile

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Calcs:
https://vsbattles.fandom.com/wiki/User_blog:Pedonar/Surviving_the_Apocalypse

 

[DeltaStriker22]

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[GarrixianXD]

I am afraid none of your pages have any references. Haven't got into analysing the quality of writing yet.

 

[DeltaStriker22]

I have already provided links for every feat.
Do I need to add what chapter the feat happened in as well?

Edit: I've added references.

 

[DeltaStriker22]

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[DeltaStriker22]

I am afraid none of your pages have any references. Haven't got into analysing the quality of writing yet.

Update: I have added references to the pages.
And a new profile to the OP.

 

[DeltaStriker22]

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[DeltaStriker22]

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[DeltaStriker22]

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[DeltaStriker22]

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[Pedonar]

9-B for base, 8-B for berserk mode

 

[DeltaStriker22]

9-B for base, 8-B for berserk mode

Updated on the OP.

 

[Pedonar]

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[Pedonar]

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[DeltaStriker22]

I am afraid none of your pages have any references. Haven't got into analysing the quality of writing yet.

So uh...
Any updates on the analysis of the quality of writing?

 

[Pedonar]

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[Pedonar]

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[Pedonar]

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[Pedonar]

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[Pedonar]

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[NatzuX]

Agree

 

[DeltaStriker22]

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[DeltaStriker22]

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[DeltaStriker22]

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[Dereck03]

I'm fine with this now that there are references Ig, although I can't really comment on the quality of the writing, as there seem to be a lot of grammatical mistake, and also punctuation errors, the main one being the period before perentesis. @GarrixianXD, since you were here already do your job and help cleaning this if you can.

Edit. Also the MC's profile could use a scrollbox in his P&A.

 

[GarrixianXD]

I'm fine with this now that there are references Ig, although I can't really comment on the quality of the writing, as there seem to be a lot of grammatical mistake, and also punctuation errors, the main one being the period before perentesis. @GarrixianXD, since you were here already do your job and help cleaning this if you can.

**** you.

Anyways, I modified the writing a bit and cleaned up notable mistakes.

 

[Dereck03]

**** you.

Yeah, love you too.

 

[GarrixianXD]

Yeah, love you too.

******

 

[DeltaStriker22]

Looks like two staff members have agreed to the CRT.
Can the pages be created on VS wiki now?

 

[Dereck03]

Looks like two staff members have agreed to the CRT.
Can the pages be created on VS wiki now?

I advise you to first remove the periods before the parentheses and references.

Take a look at this.

 

[GarrixianXD]

I advise you to first remove the periods before the parentheses and references.

Take a look at this.

I cleaned their mess now.

 

[Dereck03]

After I have beaten garrixian to make him do his job properly, the profiles are now clean and can be published.

 

[DeltaStriker22]

I cleaned their mess now.

the profiles are now clean and can be published.

Thanks for the evaluation