Star Wars Profiles

[Epyriel]

This phrasing error still persists (and could also use a scan):

which was compared to Onimi Darth Sidious

For the record I also agree with @RetroWeeeb regarding the 1-C proposal. Oneness NJO Luke by the time he actually reaches Shimrra was weak enough to be seriously wounded by regular Vong Slayers, he ain’t on par with FOTJ Luke (who himself shouldn’t even be 1-C since he only fought Abeloth’s weakened avatars but I’ll fix that in a separate CRT).

Honestly I would be fine just scaling him directly off of Shimrra as a narrative superior, but the current scaling works too (although it shouldn’t be anywhere near Planet or Solar System level, but that is a broader issue).

 

[RetroWeeeb]

I made a change in the profile, I would appreciate it if you could check it.

Sorry for the late reply, I've been busy with uni stuff. Most of the profile looks fine, but there are a few minor issues

Lifting Strength: Superhuman, exact level unknown (he was able to face inexperienced but powerful jedis like Jacen and jaina, he was able to outmaneuver jaina in a physical fight, At the time of his encounter with Jacen, he was referred to as physically stronger than him)

You haven't capitalised Jaina's name in the lifting strength section

possibly Solar System level (also comparable to Jacen solo)

At least Planet level, possibly Solar System level (It should be comparable to Jacen Solo

For the Striking Strength and Durability sections, you still have his 4-B justification as being comparable to Jacen Solo, a character who is not 4-B at this point in time. It instead should just be something like "comparable to his Attack Potency", because as it stands, the profile is currently just lying as Onimi does not get any of his 4-B scaling from Jacen.

which was compared to Onimi Darth Sidious

Then there's also this typo that I've pointed out before and which @Epyriel mentioned above. Just remove "Onimi" from the sentence and either add a scan (as Epyriel said) or link to Sidious' profile (or both).

Honestly I would be fine just scaling him directly off of Shimrra as a narrative superior, but the current scaling works too

Yeah I always found this annoying when trying to scale Onimi. Narratively he likely should be up there with the other 4-Bs of the verse but he has no feats to back it up. The only times he's shown in combat is off-guarding Jaina and throwing some debris at Jacen before the later goes full Oneness. His strength is more so implied than it is directly shown or stated, hence why I proposed the "5-B, likely 4-B" stuff.

 

[god_cat]

Sorry for the late reply, I've been busy with uni stuff. Most of the profile looks fine, but there are a few minor issues

You haven't capitalised Jaina's name in the lifting strength section


For the Striking Strength and Durability sections, you still have his 4-B justification as being comparable to Jacen Solo, a character who is not 4-B at this point in time. It instead should just be something like "comparable to his Attack Potency", because as it stands, the profile is currently just lying as Onimi does not get any of his 4-B scaling from Jacen.

Then there's also this typo that I've pointed out before and which @Epyriel mentioned above. Just remove "Onimi" from the sentence and either add a scan (as Epyriel said) or link to Sidious' profile (or both).


Yeah I always found this annoying when trying to scale Onimi. Narratively he likely should be up there with the other 4-Bs of the verse but he has no feats to back it up. The only times he's shown in combat is off-guarding Jaina and throwing some debris at Jacen before the later goes full Oneness. His strength is more so implied than it is directly shown or stated, hence why I proposed the "5-B, likely 4-B" stuff.

Oh, I apologize, I haven't been paying attention to this issue for a long time. I will try to correct all the mistakes.

 

[god_cat]

Sorry for the late reply, I've been busy with uni stuff. Most of the profile looks fine, but there are a few minor issues

You haven't capitalised Jaina's name in the lifting strength section


For the Striking Strength and Durability sections, you still have his 4-B justification as being comparable to Jacen Solo, a character who is not 4-B at this point in time. It instead should just be something like "comparable to his Attack Potency", because as it stands, the profile is currently just lying as Onimi does not get any of his 4-B scaling from Jacen.

Then there's also this typo that I've pointed out before and which @Epyriel mentioned above. Just remove "Onimi" from the sentence and either add a scan (as Epyriel said) or link to Sidious' profile (or both).


Yeah I always found this annoying when trying to scale Onimi. Narratively he likely should be up there with the other 4-Bs of the verse but he has no feats to back it up. The only times he's shown in combat is off-guarding Jaina and throwing some debris at Jacen before the later goes full Oneness. His strength is more so implied than it is directly shown or stated, hence why I proposed the "5-B, likely 4-B" stuff.

I didn't quite understand your suggestion for the striking strength section. Could you please explain it again?

 

[god_cat]

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[Apex_Predator_GX]

This thread deserves more attention.